Poem -
Reject Me Not
Reject Me Not
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Reject me not or I’ll become,
a wretched thing, my feelings, numb.
A refuge dump, a hate machine,
forsaking faith, a wraith obscene.
Reject me, I shall be reborn
of something frightful, fraught, forlorn.
Despicable, of vile things.
Explicable, since hatred sings
of feelings foul, a fetid fume,
a soured soul, a lead balloon,
that cannot fly, nor can it soar
forever chained, a hallowed whore.
Malignant minds force me below
to darker depths where none should go.
I’d rather love, my mantra be,
but God above rejected me.
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This has a quality all of its own. Disturbing beyond the boundaries of the standard script it demands attention.
Thanks for sharing this .
Thank you very much for reading, Richard.
Sorry for the delay in responding. As a relative "newbie" I am still learning how to navigate this site.
I sincerely appreciate your supportive comments.
~Dean
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What an excellent display of eloquent wordsmithing!!......dark? ~ YES!!..... but beautiful writing dear poet brother!!...... Tons-O-Stars!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo
Thanks so much for reading this, "T".
I deeply appreciate your supportive comments.
I apologize for the lateness of my response. As a relative "newbie" to the Cosmo community, I am still learning the particulars of how everything works here.
I hope you'll understand.
Thanks so much again for reading.
You are sincerely appreciated.
~Dean :}
"Reject me, I shall be reborn
of something frightful, fraught, forlorn.
Despicable, of vile things.
Explicable, since hatred sings."
such deep and dark lines, yet beyond truthful.
as always such distinguished word choice.
nice write Dean<3
~J.B.
Thank you so much, JB.
I apologize for the delay in responding. As a "newbie", I'm still learning how to navigate my way around the site.
I hope you understand.
Much love, and thanks again for reading.
~Dean :}
Dark and very brilliant Dean. First time I read The Second Coming, a long time ago, I got a shiver down the back. Ditto with this.
Stunning, Nigel
Thanks, Nigel. You're very kind.
I apologize for the lateness of this response. As a relative "newbie" to Cosmo, I am still learning the particulars of how everything works here.
I hope you'll understand.
Thanks so much again for reading, and for the thoughtful comments as well.
All are sincerely appreciated.
~Dean
The type of genre you display is so clear it becomes enlightening to me, Dean. Well done!
Tehmina xo
Thanks so much for reading and commenting, Tehmina.
I deeply appreciate it.
~Dean Kuch
Powerful write about our dances with the darkness Dean.. Ru x
"a lead balloon,
that cannot fly, nor can it soar
forever chained, a hallowed whore"
I really appreciate you weighing in with your thoughts on this one, Ru T.
Thanks a bunch for reading!
~Dean Kuch
May I join the above in lauding such a great write. Really.
a pleasure to read, it rolls from the tongue when out loud pronounced.
Great! had to Pin it.
John
Wow, thanks, John.
I not only appreciate your positive and inspiring comments concerning this piece, I'm very grateful you enjoyed the poem as well.
All my best to you, my friend.
~Dean :}