Poem -
Rhyming, Schmiming!
I like a good laugh and that why when I write
I try to show life from all sides.
The dark and the cruel, the romantic and trite
things we show and the things that we hide.
I like writing in verse and adore a good rhyme,
I love words that have rhythmĀ andĀ pace,
tales of love found and lost and of dastardly crimes,
of the dreams we all need to embrace.
But Ā sometimes I Ā find that I hit an impasse
using words just Ā likeĀ Doorhinge and Gorringe,
but Ā feel I am destined Ā to be a jackass
as nothing I know rhymes with Orange!
Ā
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Brilliant! love itĀ
Cheers StevieC xx
LOL!!....this is WAY CHARMING dear poet sister......and it shows off that WAY CREATIVE side of your abilities as well......just to come up with this idea as subject matter for a poem highlights a glowing imagination......and pulling it off with an A,B,A,B, rhyme scheme is quite impressive as well......plus ~ Hey!!......Gorringe DOES rhyme with Orange!!.....smiles......ALL STARS!!......thanx for the smiles LO!!......stay groovy girlfriend!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xoĀ : )
Hi Tony... I was wanting to write something a while ago which described a selection of colours..including orange and IĀ becameĀ just so frustrated at the brick wallĀ IĀ was up against trying to get the rhythm rhymeĀ right..I guess at that point I should have just gone Freestyle!! Maybe next time . Although having now discovered the meaning of Gorringe maybe there should be a poem about that in itself!!! Stay safe and wellĀ funky brother! xxx Lodigiana xx
Lol. Lodigiana...
nothing beats laughing at yourself..
but I was told.. being a poet.. you reserve the right to mess up words at times..
So next time go for the home run.. swing wide.
Hey! I do.. with my bad spelling and grammar.. lmbo.
Hi Wilford, I guess that being a poet gives us a little flexibility in our language and to be honestĀ it's great to use that sometimes! I love the fact that our words can be used to evoke so many emotions but if I can make someone smile then IĀ feel I've had a good day! Thank you so muchĀ for your comments and next time I really will 'swing wide'!!!Ā Lodigiana x