RICOCHET

I like the dynamic of this piece. The man in the mirror is haunting, even tormenting the lady's mind. This reflection becomes a metaphorical obsession. Thus, the tension echoes the mirror's madness. These thoughts came to mind while I mused upon the above. Well done.

Dear Poetess Carey Milton,

A ricochet is always rebound,

Bounce off a surface around,

Skip and move in and out,

Brings no more love output,

Shoot at a flat, hard surface,

Look at ugly or beauty face,

Life is sometimes, caroms,

 Play around,  Never be outside,

Striker, keep always inside

Good write, My applause, My vote

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Thanks for your response, Thanks