Poem - 22 January 2019, 06:45

Run Wild

From the moment we met, from the moment you smiled
you ignited the place in me, where my heart runs wild.

In finding your soul, it's true that, mine too was found
and, our love was no desert but, in true love we drown.

I love you without knowing from where this love springs
only I know that, within your eyes the full moon sings.

So I'll walk into the abyss and wait in the cold; in the dark
for you to come and live in me, to mend this shattered heart.

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ℙ𝕆𝔼𝕋𝔼𝕊𝕊𝔻𝔸ℝ𝕂𝕃𝕐22 January 2019, 06:52

Beautiful refrain. You are so talented

Marie Swann22 January 2019, 07:08

As always, I am truly honoured by your comment! Thank you xx

Ian William22 January 2019, 06:54

Splendidly crafted!

Marie Swann22 January 2019, 07:12

Thank you so much Ian, I am truly flattered. xx

Jamie Crawford22 January 2019, 07:03

Very well done. Love the rhymes used

Marie Swann22 January 2019, 07:12

Thank you Jamie, I really appreciate your comment! Thank you xx

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Jamie Crawford22 January 2019, 22:44

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Jamie Crawford24 January 2019, 09:05

Thank you!

Dean Kuch22 January 2019, 07:57

Simple, straight forward, and to the point, Caron.
This one gets right to the heart of the matter...

On the first part of the journey
I was looking at all the life
There were plants and birds and rocks and things
There was sand and hills and rings
The first thing I met was a fly with a buzz
And the sky with no clouds
The heat was hot and the ground was dry
But the air was full of sound
I've been through the desert on a horse with no name
It felt good to be out of the rain
In the desert you can remember your name
'Cause there ain't no one for to give you no pain

A Horse With No Name, America ©1972
?♥~Dean Kuch~♥?

Marie Swann23 January 2019, 02:12

How kind, thank you so much Dean! Yes, I remember the song, amazing lyrics! xx