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Sanctum

Sanctum

Someone watches as the paint starts to peel

Peeking inside to a wall made of steel

Peppered with dimples from battering shots

It defines a hidden barricade of brutality

Coated in pink, the room looks so sweet

Dandy candy daddy could stop with a treat

But the pretty rose carpet is lined with barbs

That will snag and stab at the curious
 

Someone keeps looking, slow steps, they beseech

Curiosity can kill, but they don’t seem to blink

Above the ceiling fan whirs in defense

As the paint now peels faster in stark defiance

Demonic voice hisses “Don’t take one more step”

A bouncing puppet clown seems to glare its eyes red

“No don’t” says the voice, “Or I’ll cut her up dead”

The steel wall rattles and shakes with a bang
 

Someone keeps coming, their eyes ever watchful

Paint almost gone from the battered steel wall

“NO DON’T… CAN’T YOU HEAR” hisses out clear

Pungent with menace and heavy despair            

Dimples become whips that lash with tongue

Blood starts to drip as the watcher still comes

Barbs push to snag and stab someone through

As the hissing now screams “STOP I TELL YOU…”
 

Someone reaches out and touches the steel

It melts into water, so fluid and clear

A hole appears in the battered remains

The hissing dies slow as the wall evaporates

“Don’t” shakes the voice and a whimper ensues

Someone kneels in silence and quietly views

A little girl curls herself in a ball

Keeping her head buried, she looks so small
 

Someone then whispers, in compassionate plea

“It’s okay beautiful, you’re safe here with me”

Blue eyes twinkling with unsung tears

Peer up at someone… someone so near

“No one has gotten to see me before.”

Someone gently smiles and leans close once more

“I am not just anyone, I’m someone special

I still carry my own walled up sanctum.”
 

Little lips shiver as hurt starts to spill

Someone touches hair un-kept from abuse

“It needs a good brushing,” someone muses and smirks

Small hand pushes away and pulls back with a jerk

“I keep it this way, so no one will see.”

“I know,” someone says, with a light in their eye

“But sweetie you can’t keep the brightness inside.

It shines out to others, far and wide.”
 

“But others hurt me” the little voice says with despair

“My light must be ugly from the scars that I bear.”

Someone touches a tear as it curls down her cheek

“Not true little dove, scars make you unique.”

Little girl sniffs and looks up at the sky

“I’m not really this small” she whispers, “Only on the inside”

Someone smiles conspiratorially and winks,

“I know… as am I.”
 

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Georgina Richardson

Gosh that is a superb piece Rebecca. It flowed beautifully and the rhyming was perfect. Well done for a well thought out piece that sent shivers as I read it!! The picture is perfect too.

Love G xx

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RRG (Rebecca)

Thank you G. So glad you were able to stop by and read this. Took some time and some quiet introspection to find this piece inside me. I love the end result though.  Thank you hon.

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Tony Taylor

WOW!!..... this is an amazingly powerful narrative REBECCA!!...... sad, horrifying, the stuff of great storytelling!!....the use of dialogue driving this piece deep into the minds eye of your reader......I could see this monstrous depiction in crystal clear imagery as I read...... an outstanding poetic accomplishment sweet poetess!!........ extremely well conceived ...and....BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!.... wow!...........ALL STARS....PINNED.......high fives to you Rebecca!!......LOVE and ROCKETS !!.......T xo

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RRG (Rebecca)

Tony that means a lot to me thank you. This took me most of the night. Longer pieces scare me a little because staying on point can be difficult if the wording isn't right. I'm very pleased with the result and am so honored that you like it too. Thanks for the like and the pin :) Hugs and Blessings dear friend. 

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Devon La Porte

Great write Rebecca. Love the horrifying ambience in the beginning and this someone which I think was genius to keep referring to as someone throughout. Nice rhyme and I dig the the whole story you created. Much love and peace to you.

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RRG (Rebecca)

Thank you Devon. Yeah that "someone" worked didn't it. Glad you stopped by to share and read. Hugs and Blessings :)

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sparrowsong

Hello Rebecca...

I am glad I didn't miss this...

I have some catching up to do...

This is one those writes that you want to be the hero to save this little one...

I felt like I watching this all go down...

Great write! 

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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RRG (Rebecca)

Hello Sparrow, just to have you stop in is a great pleasure. I'm so glad you were able to connect with this piece. It is one I am proud of. Nice to see you hon. I hope you're having a great week. Hugs and Blessings.

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