Scottish Splendor: A Lanturne Poem

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hush falls,
winds whisper
as lush green glades
breathe
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Note:
The Lanturne is a five-line verse shaped like a Japanese lantern with a syllabic pattern of one, two, three, four, one.
Thanks for reading!
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? wonderful write, you are most talented
And you are most kind, poetessdarkly.
The poem really needs to be centered to achieve the greatest effect. But I don't know how to do that here on Cosmo.
Thanks so much for reading,
~Dean ?
Thanks very much for reading, Cherie.
The Lanturne poem is a very brief form of poetic expression. But you can say an awful lot in few words if it's done right.
Hugs!
~Dean :)
Well done......T ?
Thanks, "T".
Much obliged.
~Dean ?
Good stuff!
Makes you take a moment to think.
Thanks, Keith.
I appreciate your comments.
~Dean