Secret
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It sits inside,
Multiplies and divides,
Balloons up,
But does not deflate,
But irritates and aggravates,
Worms itself deeper and deeper,
Into the intestine track,
Makes its way into my heart,
To bleed yet another attack,
Drip by drip,
Drop by drop,
An embryonic foetus,
That grows and grows,
The eel circles,
Chases the snake,
Swims from my head to my toes,
Causes my body to rattle and roll,
Until I lose my balance,
Until I lose my breath,
Until I lose control,
It slithers and slimes,
Worms its way in,
Gets deep underneath my skin,
In every crevice,
In every pore,
This thing is inside me,
Gently bleeding me red raw,
It’s a burden that I carry,
And I don’t think I can’t take anymore.
By Sarfraz Ahmed © Copyright 2020
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Comments
Hi Saf. Wow really explained the excruciating pain in holding a secret in this one. Excellent write. Some great verses too. ? Px
Pratibha thanks so much...a secret can be a burden ready to erupt. I wanted to convey that. Thanks for your feedback x
Excellent write Sarfraz , there was s certainly a sense of unbearable pressure in this work..hugs ?
Marion you sweetheart. Thanks for the lovely feedback Oh the unbearable pressure of keeping secrets. Xxxx and hugsÂ
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Fantastic! You're a heck of a writer. I'm really impressed. Loved the theme, and how it was presented. Excellent!Â
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Saf is coming to the next meeting....!!
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My mate gave us this topic ? to write about as we both do poetry. Best way to write pick a topic!!
OK! Sazzafraz is welcome to join Cheerie's Angels. Can he bring food? And beverages...and plates and napkins. Thanks! M.Â