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Seed

Dedicated to Jill Tait for her brilliant verses in ryhme and reaching 3000 awesome poems!!

Seed

  A tiny seed
                  Grows
Beneath the earth
   Takes form
          Structure
                   Of it's own
  To change the world
        Emerging out
             Through the dark
                           Into the light
              Growing fast
         To reach a height
   We shall never see 
       This tiny seed
      Is a magnificent oak tree 

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Jill Tait

Awwwww Pratibha my lovely lassI am so truly honoured💕❤️💕 I lovr thisun sooo much my lil shining ⭐️

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Pratibha Savani

Hi Jill. I'm so pleased you love it too. The seed is you and your first poem that has now grown into thousands, just like an oak tree, long lived, strong and maturing all the time. 
And you love the outdoors up north with the countryside, I wanted to dedicate a poem to you around nature. Thank you for the lovely comments. Well deserved on your incredible achievement 3000!! Whoop whoop!! Much love your friend Px 🙏🏽💕💕💕

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Pratibha Savani

🌳🌳🌳🌳🌳
and the roots grow into a beautiful friendship 
Pxxx 🥰🥰🥰

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Jill Tait

Awww beautifully said ❤️❤️❤️

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Greg Etsell

wonderful poem 
And Jill should 
be honoured 
Jill is  a shining star 

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Pratibha Savani

Hi Greg. She totally is a shining star. Thank you for the lovely words and pin. You are too kind. And you are also a bright star on cosmo and now joining passion of poetry!! Brilliant!! Will need to catch up on your writes! Px 🙏🏽💕🥰

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Jill Tait

Awwww Thanking you too my great friend Greg I love the fact poetry has brought us all together appreciating each other 💕🌹💕

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Gwendoline

Awe p you are on fire today 🔥 two dedications and both so worthy too. Cosmo would not be the same without our Jill who is a fluid thought provoking crafter of words and meaning. 3000! Wowsers just AMAZING 🤩 

And this poem is a beautiful journey about the beauty of nature’s creation of the oak tree. A wise strong tree indeed. Very apt my friend ❤️⭐️📌

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Pratibha Savani

Thank you Gwendoline. I so wanted to dedicate a poem to Jill...even more so when reaching 3000 poems! I couldnt believe it when she told me!!
I've never posted 2 poems in one day before lol....that's Jill everyday!! Lol
So yea guess I'm on fire lol.
The oak tree was the perfect symbol to represent it all for Jill. Glad you picked up on it too. You are always wise with your words and comments. Love seeing you on my posts. Love Px😘

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Jill Tait

Awww Thanking you too Gwen my lovely lass 💕🌹💕

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The fish of the sea

What a lovely dedication and write. Your unique structure shines in this one. Hope to catch up on your most recent writes soon! Your friend Max 

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Pratibha Savani

Hi Max. Thanks for reading and the lovely pin. Always love reading your comments. Pxxx

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Sarfraz Ahmed

Pratibha, another wonderful write  love your play on words.

Brilliant 

Sarfraz Ahmed 

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Pratibha Savani

Thanks Sarf. It's been fun playing with words. Thanks for the pin too! Chat soon. Pxxx

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Wilford Barker

Hi Pratibha.. it's been a while.
i join with you to celebrate Jill's milestone..
it seems she is always on the go.. keeping us informed, making us think, taking us on trips 
and bringing smiles to our faces.. Good work.
Wishing Jill all the best.. 
Cosmofunnel Spider-Man 
lol. 

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Pratibha Savani

Thank you Wilford for your kind words. It is a massive achievement. So many great poets on this site. Like yourself. Have a great day. Px

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Marion

Absolutely adore this write P... and dedicated to the wonderful.lady who.is the heart and soul of cosmo...our Jill.
Loads of hugs to you both ♥️♥️♥️

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Jill Tait

💕💕💕💕💕🌹💕💕💕💕

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Pratibha Savani

Indeed she is too. Thank you for the lovely comment. Jill loves it and 3000 should be celebrated. Px 💕💕💕

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John Loopstra

I love this piece so much, but then I live with many strong oaks around and always feel their power, even though they were seedlings when even my great great grandmother wasn't born. Must see I get the stars working on my Huawei 

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Pratibha Savani

Thank you so much John. I'm so pleased you could relate to this. I just love nature and writing about it. I've really only seen a very very old oak tree in Nottingham forest. Its got support around it to help. It's just amazing how brilliantly beautiful it is and growing for so long that we can see its full beauty. So I completely get what u mean in your comment. Thanks for reading and votes. Pxxx

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John Loopstra

Yes, truly old oaks are magnificent and I always greet young sapling and wish them well, so that in a next cycle on Earth I may greet their majesty once more🍁

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Shaun Cronick

Pratibha, apologies for being late to this party and suffice to say after reading that this place wouldn't be the Cosmo it truly is without our Jill.
Jill the prolific poet, Jill who is nature's greatest observer and life's observer too and sublimely evident in her beautiful uplifting poems of light and hope.
Jill who can write about any subject matter and Jill who uplifts us when down with not just her poems but treasured comments as well when much needed.
A gracious well written tribute to a gracious lady and respected poet.
An enchanting  beautifully written, superb homage poem mirroring its superb title.
Full honours Pratibha, but it's not about stars and pins, it is simply about respect.
And respect to you my friend and to good Jill.❤️❤️

 

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