Nice! Simple, yet profound.
And rounded off with some sage advice. Unfortunately, I fear you may be like King Canute standing at the water's edge and commanding the tide to roll out.
Have you ever read the poemΒ Cuchulain's Fight with the SeaΒ by WB Yeats? Moving the tideΒ didn't work out so well for HIM either...but sure, we can try!!
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Nice! Simple, yet profound.
And rounded off with some sage advice. Unfortunately, I fear you may be like King Canute standing at the water's edge and commanding the tide to roll out.
I love the title, too! Beautiful poem.
J x
Oh wow, thank you so much for your kind words, yes I can't move the tide but we can but try :)
Have you ever read the poemΒ Cuchulain's Fight with the SeaΒ by WB Yeats? Moving the tideΒ didn't work out so well for HIM either...but sure, we can try!!
J x
No I haven't read it, I'm guessing only Moses has that figured out ;)
Interesting piece indeed !
Keep writing, because you are gifted and have much to say throughΒ poetry.
Wishing you much happiness in this festive season. Β :)
Thank you Richard, I really appreciate your feedback, Merry Christmas to you too :)