Poem - 01 December 2020, 19:54

Semi-Sympathetic

Choices...

The fish of the sea

Options
Are concoctions
Of risk and reward

Decisions
Are driven
By the pen of the sword

Sweet and sour
Hearts a horde
But the panthers pounced
And I hid, I stored

The thoughts
The stories
Open hallways
Became closed doors

Time to wake up
From the endless shower
Pitta patter on toe tips
Wading through the snowdrifts

Tap tap
On the window seal
Come right in
And open your ears

That’s just how I feel
The Fish of the Sea

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Drama Nonsense Verse

Topic:

The Soul

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Deb01 December 2020, 20:02

My soul improvises the words to your beautiful poem.

The fish of the sea01 December 2020, 20:04

Awww thanks Deb! I think I enjoyed writing this one a lot, so I`m so glad you liked it! Best wishes your friend, TFOTS

Deb01 December 2020, 20:07

your words enlighten my soul my friend! Please continue 🤗🤗I enjoy your writing

The fish of the sea01 December 2020, 20:08

Thanks so much, Deb, and Visa Versa to you! We all lift each other up here on Cosmo! Best wishes and peace to you

Jim "The Lad" ....01 December 2020, 20:20

I think this is my fav of your writes Max! I think I get your vibe in this one most of all, or maybe I'm just getting to know you better. Either way enjoyed my friend!.................Jim

The fish of the sea01 December 2020, 20:23

Wow, I`m touched, Jim. To be honest I like how it came out too! Blame it on thinking too much in the shower... had to repeat the lines out loud heaps so I didn't forget before I could get to my phone! Lol XD. Thanks again Jim, I really appreciate it. Your friend, Max

Magic Bellmore01 December 2020, 20:37

Awesome write! It captured my attention from the very first line (and i have the attention span of a goldfish....). Great job!

The fish of the sea01 December 2020, 21:10

Awww thanks Bell! I'm glad you liked it. Just came to me it seems. Best wishes to you my friend.

Lorris Morris02 December 2020, 10:14

Great love it ....all smiles

The fish of the sea02 December 2020, 11:41

Thanks so much Lorris, your comments always make me smile~ best wishes. TFOTS

Marion02 December 2020, 11:46

Mysterious Max... speaks of seeing the light, though not in a spiritual sense I felt..more dog eat dog kind of way..hugs x

The fish of the sea02 December 2020, 14:44

Thanks so much Marion! Hit the nail on the head with that comment, your really awesome at reading and interpreting my work. Best wishes and hugs to you my friend! Max