Poem -
She is The Bringer of Laughter
Without you baby, maybe I did have wingsΒ
but set my flight on ordinary things
moonlight offered nothing but captivity
Without your point of view, I couldn't see.
Β The sound of laughter never felt this sweet
you got your ways to make me feelΒ happy
(for now, a housewarming gift, hugs)
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Tender message displaying warmth and appreciation within a relationship.
Touching delivery.Β
Wishing you well as always. Β :)
thanks Richard, what a terrific comment, cheers pal
Take care my friend.
:)
Hello Christopher...
This is a very sweet write to someone who has...
Put a new song in your heart?
You don't realize that you eyes were closed until someone says...
Open?
A hug is a housewarming gift?
Oh man!
No wonder why my gift was put on a shelf...
Great write!Β
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsongΒ
thanks Sparrow, the poem is for two special people, they give a lot more on here than they get, great comment, thanks
hey Flower, thanks for comment, I'm hoping it brings a smile to them as well, cheers
lovely write x
hey smiling Susan O'Reilly, thanks a million
Hi Chris, lovely lovely write, warm and pleasant read. Thanks for sharing such a romantic piece. Warm regards. Cheers.
thanks Cleo, hugs
Beautiful. And beautifully written. The love of others can be such an inspiring thing, to see two people close to you that you actually root on their love is such a heartfelt feeling. T and C are lucky to have such a friend to devote such a lovely write too. Peace bro.
Hey Devon, thanks man, dude do you know the The Tragically Hip, a rock group from Kingston, Ontario Canada?....New Orleans is Sinking; one good tune, Β they're having a farewell tour; big news over here, Β sad story though, the lead singing is dying and wants to do one more tour, inspiring shit my friend....yeah T and C mean a lot to all of us; I'm not much of a friend; but trying....cheers pal
You know what I have never heard of them but I am definitely going to look them up now that you suggested and thank you for that, you know all too well how much of a fan of music iam lol. Chris...I think as long as yourΒ cordial and polite it's enough.Β
Hey Brother CHRIS!!......sorry it's been a while getting to this one.......some crazy challenges changing my entire life around.......when I read the first two lines of this .....I knew immediately what the inspiration behind the write was.......thanx so much for being the groovy dude you are at heart......so glad I went back and found this.......swear I had NO IDEA.......I was just going back to catch up on some of your stuff and then Cherie got excited to hear about your dedication......you scored me some extra hugs-n-kisses bro!! (lol)........Thanx for the awesome words my friends.......talk soon....peace......T xo
lol, no worries T, glad you like, hey after the last message you sent me I couldn't sleep that night so I got to writing, took Β me awhile; I wrote about 5 different versions; hated all, then I took a deep breathe and went for simplicity; my bro. and sis are happy so why waste words, lol....love and hugs to two of my favorite people in the whole freaking world, prays and well wishesΒ
Hello Chris. I am moved. I love your work. This is beautiful. Great work. I feel you. Lol. :-)
hello, Bridgette, thanks a million for the comment, I like it a lot, cheers my friend
HI Chris this is a lovely poem and brilliantly delivered. family is important i learnt the hard 10 years ago i chose a woman over family lost my kids and all touch with the rest of my family now i live by one ruleΒ
Girlfriends come and go but family will always be there.
good write my friend
wow, Jeff, great comment man, loved the piece of advice also, thank you
Christopher, your poetry always shines so bright. beautiful!