Poem -
SHE WHO CAN NOT FORGIVE
Hey you! Who me? said the man
with the churlish grin
Is this what you do to a girl
who loved you deep,within
She gave you all her love, put
you on a pedestal so high
And then you destroyed her
self worth, please tell me why?
How could you use her love to
your own advantage?
Why could`nt you love her
adore her, and not damage
Men like you should be ousted
away from all women
Never to be loved again
and never forgiven
Your traits are nasty
cruel and vile
Pray! she meets
a man who
can once
more
make her
smile
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Hello Sis Debs...
You certainly are a woman of defense...
It is clear who's side your on...
Everyone deserves to be loved...
People get the idea that they are always right and they aren't sorry for at least trying to see that people really do want to love them...
They become dangerous to themselves when they believe they know everything...
When they feed off the emotions that life is not fair and it sucks...
They grow into that tree...
Trees have been cut down...
Their roots may still be in the ground...
But, it's easy not to miss an ugly tree...
We don't forgive people for them...
We forgive people for ourselves?
The more we hold anger and resentment...
The more it only hurts us...
When I die there is no person on in this world I will have to answer to about my life...
Their forgiveness is not for my well being...
Their forgiveness to any is for their own well being...
We can't expect some person to assure our happiness...
That's something that only we can do for ourselves, before we can be happy together with someone else?
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hi Sparrowsong Thank you for your comments
I agree in that not forgiving him she sometimes
still holds anger and resentment and she knows
it does her no good,she hopes one day she
will be able to forgive but she will never forget
what he did to her
hugs Debs
Hi Cherie I agree somethings that happen leave
lasting scars that will never heal,i`m glad to hear
that your dad is more mellow now, sharp words cut deep
The heart of this poem is to forgive and to heal
them scars as best she can and hope to move forward
I agree as you say a work in progress
Thank you for your comments i appreciate
them so much love n hugs Debs xox
Oh, my dear Debs,
So sad that one of your first loves was this incredible cretin, who partook of your cherished soul, that you gave without hesitation, but, only in lust, and not in love. Your readers feel so sad for you, and are looking to the stars, begging them to send that special man, who will once again bring smiles to your face, and tranquility to your life.
Hugs, Peace and Love,
xox Larry
Hi Larry This one is not about me but someone i think
a lot of who has been hurt abused beaten and put in hospital
by a man she adored and was with for 10 years,
they are apart now and in my eyes i hope for good.
Thanks for reading and thanks for your
concern you are a compassionate man
love n hugs Debs xox
Hi Flower Girl i`m sorry to hear you have been treated like this,
scars can run deep, it is hard to trust again after
So glad for you that you found your love and soul mate..
Thanks so much for the fav means a lot
love and hugs Debs xo