Poem -
Silence
Silence is my sister
She's devoted to finding peace
But fighting without a voice
Is no lightly taken feat
She stalks out the moonlit night
And wrestles her way in
Shrouded in her namesake
Sprinting toward her win
One chance to make a change
In a world consumed in indifference
My sister's name is silence
She is the resistance
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Wow!!........I was VERY pleasantly surprised with this piece..........I've never read you before (my loss).......this is a great write my friend.......absolutely perfect metering and formatting.......and your subject matter so softly and subtly delivered......who the heck are you?......gonna have to read more.........Loved the way you used the "sister" as a segue for your intonation here..........really well conceived and delivered friend.............smokin' grooves........ 5*s FAV .......smiles.........T xx
Thank you so much! :) I'm glad you liked it and hope if you check out my other work you enjoy it just as much! :)
I think Tony described your poem perfectly! I also love the structure of this write and the double meaning behind it. Amazing!! 5*s! I am loving your work!!
Val ♥️
Thank you so much! :) I'm glad you liked it and hope if you check out my other work you enjoy it just as much! :)
Thank you so much! You're comments are much appreciated! :)