Similarities

Lightning strikes at midnight.
On your outing, flying kites.
You hold your shield and with your pike.
You think that your invincible.
But you should know,
Life is quite when not complex.
Like a marksman best shot.
A statisticianās best guess.
Itās all about the movement of the operator.
And the manipulatorās attempt to make him stumble.
Donāt let you fingers fumble ā donāt let your thoughts break theme.
Iām trying to say,
Remember, coal turns to steam.
And without fuel there is no feeling, is no furnace is no dream.
So, it saddens me to watch those go by,
Unignited ā without self-control, without self-esteem.
But a lifeboat can only hold so many,
and a river can only run downstream.
Itās funny to think about,
That some sailors protest to such a simple request
To live long and travel high seas.
And a soldierās request, the last, made of thirst.
In such a simple conquest.
Goes unheard of.
Unseen.
If he ever stood for something, what on Earth did he fall for? What ever could it be?
He fell.
For nothing.
And now lifeless, he bleeds.
Gone.
Ā

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Comments
hi Max! your wisdom shines through here! hope you are flourishing! glad to see you here!miss you and so many great original friends!..........................Jim
Hey mate! Thanks for your comment! I miss our group too, things change... for better or for worse. I hope your alright over the water there. Things very very busy here atm. Peace to you my "old" friend!
understand! hope all goes swimmingly for you always! where ever you are!
Exceptional .. ink extraordinarily & purposefully well spilt .. NevilleĀ
Thanks Neville!! Means a lot mate.
You are most welcome .. and truly .. NevilleĀ
It is the greatest of illusions that we believe we are in control when nothing is further from the truth. Great write Max x
Agreed Marion, we can't control the Illusion, but we can choose how we live it. Thanks Marion, it's always nice to hear from you~
Hello again,Ā
really enjoyed this one, interesting work
lorna xx
Thanks Lorna!! Not myĀ favourite pen, but you gottaĀ accommodate for one's own imagination! Your comments mean a lot!
It might not be your favourite, but it was very enjoyable for me to read xx
Brightened up my morning thank you Lorna~