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Similarities

Similarities

Lightning strikes at midnight.
On your outing, flying kites.

You hold your shield and with your pike.
You think that your invincible.

But you should know,

Life is quite when not complex.
Like a marksman best shot.
A statistician’s best guess.

It’s all about the movement of the operator.
And the manipulator’s attempt to make him stumble.
Don’t let you fingers fumble – don’t let your thoughts break theme.

I’m trying to say,

Remember, coal turns to steam.
And without fuel there is no feeling, is no furnace is no dream.

So, it saddens me to watch those go by,
Unignited – without self-control, without self-esteem.

But a lifeboat can only hold so many,
and a river can only run downstream.

It’s funny to think about,

That some sailors protest to such a simple request
To live long and travel high seas.

And a soldier’s request, the last, made of thirst.
In such a simple conquest.

Goes unheard of.
Unseen.

If he ever stood for something, what on Earth did he fall for? What ever could it be?
He fell.

For nothing.
And now lifeless, he bleeds.

Gone.
 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

hi Max! your wisdom shines through here! hope you are flourishing! glad to see you here!miss you and so many great original friends!..........................Jim

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The fish of the sea

Hey mate! Thanks for your comment! I miss our group too, things change... for better or for worse. I hope your alright over the water there. Things very very busy here atm. Peace to you my "old" friend!

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Jim "The Lad" ....

understand! hope all goes swimmingly for you always! where ever you are!

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Neville

Exceptional .. ink extraordinarily & purposefully well spilt .. Neville 

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Neville

You are most welcome .. and truly .. Neville 

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Marion

It is the greatest of illusions that we believe we are in control when nothing is further from the truth. Great write Max x

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The fish of the sea

Agreed Marion, we can't control the Illusion, but we can choose how we live it. Thanks Marion, it's always nice to hear from you~

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Lorna

Hello again, 
really enjoyed this one, interesting work
lorna xx

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The fish of the sea

Thanks Lorna!! Not my favourite pen, but you gotta accommodate for one's own imagination! Your comments mean a lot!

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Lorna

It might not be your favourite, but it was very enjoyable for me to read xx

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