Poem - 06 May 2014, 07:45

SIXTH SENSE (topic - spirituality)

SIXTH SENSE

The scent of a song
Stroked my senses
I watched it dance
All dressed in burnt cinnamon.
It twined around my mind
And left a taste of wanderlust
Sparkling on my tongue.
My fingertips caressed a
Leaf-green memory
Of when the world was young.
And then I heard His smiling face
Strike straight to my heart
As I drifted in His grace.

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Sense Spirituality

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Narrative

8 comments

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Carey Milton06 May 2014, 10:33

A profound piece Susan ..
To write about how a scent feels or a touch smells comes from knowledge of the sixth sense..
Captured to perfection!
My vote and nomination x:)

Susan Birch06 May 2014, 11:07

Thanks Carey!

Sue xxx

Tina Moore06 May 2014, 10:38

Lovely piece of a sixth sense... Tina x

Susan Birch06 May 2014, 12:15

Thank you Tina :)

Sue x

piusha singh06 May 2014, 23:38

Excellent verses Susan...love it.

Susan Birch08 May 2014, 01:04

Thanks Piusha :)

Sue x

BLOSSOM07 May 2014, 02:23

A beautifully composed piece of poetry Susan, your lines of imagery are magical and spring to life when you read them. It gets better the more you read it; you are fast becoming one of my favourite poets. A very talented lady. 5*s and nomination from me too:)

Susan Birch08 May 2014, 01:06

Thank you Rachel I am very honoured by your comments. I just love to write! Thank you for the nomination too.

Sue x