A MIDSUMMER NIGHTMARE
A MIDSUMMER NIGHTMARE
The forest, silent and still, waits.
'Tis Midsummer's Eve and soon my fate will unfold.
Not the sweet and merry tale Shakespeare told but
A dark and chilling fate I did not earn.
Listen and learn not to scorn the elder tales
Whispered and sung when the world was young.
My father, late and lost
Was caught up, to his cost,
By the Wild ride.
Snatched up and swept along
By that hellish throng of hunters
Led by the Forest Lord.
As that fiendish throng cavorted
He was supported by an elven maid
Who rode at his side.
And so he survived 'til sunrise
And chose her as his prize.
It was fated....they loved...
And I was created.
My mother, marked as the Huntsman's bride,
Was destined to rule at his side, his queen.
Fairest of the Tuatha de',
He claimed her... despite her nay.
She took her chance, escaped his vice
And did not consider the price
Her child would pay.
Now snatched from his grasp
His hatred seethed and grew
He swore what'ere befell
I would take her place in Hell.
I am the unpaid debt.
Wyrd and human hybrid get.
Night has fallen and, once more,
I await the call. Prepare to cheat fate
And deny him, as before.
The horn sounds as the Ride draws near
And my fear chokes me.
Hooves pound, horses neigh
And, in this witching hour,
I pray for salvation as his
Hellhounds bray and prowl,
Growling, sniffing for my scent.
Hell-bent on offering me to their Lord.
With eyes closed against the glamour
I still hear the clamour of their Hellish glee
And the whispered call, drear and fell,
...”come, come .. the Master waits..
Ride with us to the gates of Hell..”
Stillness, silence, the night has passed.
A fair morn has dawned at last
And I am safe for yet another year.
But the Huntsman does not forget
Nor is he forgiving.
He rules the shades and hunts the living.
Unless death snatches my soul from his hands
I am his eternal goal, his sworn revenge.
But I will cheat him yet!
I will forgo what all maids crave.
I will live apart, deny my heart
And go untouched to my grave.
I will not beget a child to this unholy debt.
© Susan E Birch - JUNE 2013
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Susan birch, this had me intrigued from start to finish,
and wow, what a finale
"Stillness, silence, the night has passed.
A fair morn has dawned at last
And I am safe for yet another year.
But the Huntsman does not forget
Nor is he forgiving.
He rules the shades and hunts the living.
Unless death snatches my soul from his hands
I am his eternal goal, his sworn revenge.
But I will cheat him yet!
I will forgo what all maids crave.
I will live apart, deny my heart
And go untouched to my grave.
I will not beget a child to this unholy debt."
loved it sweetheart, well done, much love nardine Sanderson xoxo
Thanks Nardine. I love my 'celtic style' poems and loved writing this. My intentions were totally different to how the poem turned out...the first write was most unsatisfying so I rewrote it and didn't strive to make it fit into what I had originally intended....the poem took over and this was the result. I love it and glad you do too :D
Sue xxx
PS...not writing much at the moment because I am getting house sorted to put on market..also house hunting so chaos reigns at the moment lol :D
Best of luck sweetheart, i know the pains of that, hopefully returning back once settled, with some more exciting excellent writes, for my viewing, can't wait, A MIDSUMMER NIGHTMARE is by far my fav, love to you sweetie, take care x nardine xx
Susan Birch,
This is an excellent write, My applause
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Hi Susan, this is an impressive write......I loved the ending......and like Nardine, it was engrossing start to finish...........your sense of timing is stellar.......well done my friend..........tony xx
Thank you Tony!
A great deal of my writing has a celtic influence and I love retelling old folk tales/myths etc. Also attempt some Shakespeare occasionally and anything that takes my muses fancy lol....eclectic I guess :D
Sue xx
Susan that is a really beautiful piece and as Tony says, very impressive indeed. Stunningly well written and it flowed with genius. Your talent shines honey. Love to you. G xx
Thanks Georgina :)
You are so encouraging and inspirational...I am very grateful to you.
Sue xxx