Slippery Slope Part 4
A Countless Rant
Drip drop,
Can they stop?
Too busy,
Standing in one spot.
Maybe preferred actions,
Are a distraction.
To cause a pointless, frictionless reaction...
You already know this!
Brain`s hedges on the Roses,
Branching, connecting the process.
Think I won’t notice?
What? A likeness to Moses.
Leading as in splitting the oceans?
Hi-five to that notion...
Of a condemned, poisoned potion.
Come on! Find the light, Find a key,
Complex analogy,
Tracking my sanity.
Ha, great excuse!
For the formality.
Dead with the blade,
Waters you wade.
Into the vanity,
With the regrets you just made.
Interesting statement…
Mind the step on your way in,
Pieces and people,
Please just meet your payment.
Lies, Lies.
I`ll give you a dime.
If you say you love me.
Because in the beautiful Sea.
A drop of water
Can make all the difference.
In a world so divine…
The Fish of the Sea.
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" In a world so divine" seeing someone? no where near Hobart? XD fore go the dime I love reading your words my friend!.................................Jim
XD, yes I'm seeing someone, have been for quite a while lol, Luma, whos on this site. But the waters are calm where I am, this work was ages in the making.. and emotions are like waves.... not sure how I could ship my dime to you... hmmm. Not much good to me in Aus... XD, peace to you as always. Thanks much Jim! Your friend, Max
Will Luma say where she lives?XD
XD, hope not!
Even if I rent you our bed and breakfast in Texas for free!?
Hmmm, nice offer but no thanks, Not many flights out at the moment... Stay safe Jim!
Fish
Awesome poem. I like the way this flows
Wow! Thanks Greg, this poem started its life as heaps of 4 line stanzas! The hardest part was stitching them together so I'm so glad you liked the flow. Kind regards to you my friend!
WOW!!...what a great read that was FISH!!...I REALLY enjoyed that....all of the complexities made magic in my minds eye...because the rhyme scheme was crisp and perfect.....so when you read this aloud it seems to make a music all its own......I haven't read the first three "Countless Rants"....but if this is ranting I'd like to buy a few RANTS to pass around to some of my poetry friends!!....Just excellent writing my friend!!.......ALL STARS & PINNED!!.....ALWAYS a pleasure dear poet brother!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!....T xo : )
Wow Tony... you have no idea how much that means to me. What an electrifying comment. Yes, I used to specialise in Rants, or close structured rhyme as a way to relieve stress and thoughts pent up in my head. But by all means please share my work! No need for a monetary exchange ;). I always love you comments, which always guide me to learn and grow as a poet. Peace to you brother! Smiles always. Kind regards. FISH
Yes if the water is love. Cheers.
XD, so very true Yiyan! My intention here exactly. Peace and smiles to you. The Fish of the Sea
"Because in the beautiful Sea.
A drop of water
Can make all the difference.
In a world so divine…"
I wish you meet all the drops you can, swimming that Great Big Ocean out there✌🐳🐬🐟
XD, aww thanks so much kind John! You have no clue how much that means to me. Peace and smiles to you always. Why dont you come try the water down hear in Aus sometime? ;)
I would gladly, but the lotteries don't cooperate, that oil tanker of money always seems to miss my bankaccount😭😅🤣. Who knows one day when I have retired from the job me and the wife come say hellooooo
True that! Perhaps in another life my friend.
Sure thing!