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Snake Pit

Snake Pit

A penny for your thoughts?
A Nickel for your mind?
I doubt that I could keep good count.
Of the trains I’ve left behind.

These stations are now bare.
These railway sleepers – new.
I doubt that I could let you in.
If you so happen, do you choose.

Me.
It’s quite damn interesting.

That I’m cut into quarters, three sails, 2 waters – Jack of diamonds.
I’m one of a kind.
Yet I can’t hold a strong facade.
When you look in to my eyes.

It seems like it’s entrapment.
Like warm butter run through – a knife.
Like a snake pit of heavy consequences.
Of scaly, sweetened lies.

Don’t bother me again.

Because what does it matter, If my intentions are so clear?
Do I even stand just half a chance, If I seem to always steer?
Towards the right path.

When they tell me.

“You should always choose left.”

And so, I’ve learnt this the long way round.

That these feelings.
Never end.
 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

too cool my always moving friend! hope you are well, and not in one! all the best!.........................................Jim

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The fish of the sea

Jim, no matter what I'm thinking or what I'm up to you always bring me a smile. Cheers to you mate. Hope you are well also!

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sparrowsong

Hello Max...

Has anyone told you that you definitely have a way with words and art?

Thank you for being here...

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

 

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The fish of the sea

Hey SS. Thanks mate, that's really kind of you. I'm glad some people enjoy my work these days, if only a small few. Cheers to you mate. 

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Being Me

Hi Max! i like this poem. its deeply reflective and it reads so well. hope all is good with you x

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The fish of the sea

Hey Tina! Thanks so much for your kind comment. It means a lot that you think so! Hope all is well with you too!

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Lorna

Hello Max, I really enjoyed this one
quite thought provoking when you said 'trains you left behind" I instantly thought  train of thought...and how many get lost in my mind Haha
hope your well
Lorna xx

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The fish of the sea

Hey Lorna, my intention exactly! Glad it hit its mark! XD. You brought a smile to my face this morning thank you so much my kind fellow poet. Wishing you well~ Max

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