So He Hit Me
I met this guy that seemed so sweet
Good looks was just an added treat
His smile could light up any dark night
I felt that this could be my Mr. Right
We walked the roads hand in hand
His love for me you don't understand
He made me smile when nobody could
Why do you lie when he is so good
You must be jealous cause he is mine
This is where you've crossed the line
Sure we fight like all couples do
What is really wrong with youΒ
So he hit me but promised not again.Β
Why can't you go back to being my friend
Ok now he slapped me cause I got rude
He also wouldn't allow me to eat my food
Is this how it really is suppose to be
I mean he still says how much he loves me
Maybe I was wrong and should treat him better
His love shined through in this beautiful letter
I knew it would be different once I became his wife
How wrong I was as I have now lost my life
He will go to prison for this fatal attack
But we all know that it won't bring me back
You tried to warn me and was my friend all along
I wish I would have listened instead I was wrong
If you have a friend that says to get away
You may just want to hear what she has to say
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Comments
amazing construction, Yvette what a unique and creativeΒ perspective to write from; not 'preachy' but getting your message across in clarion tone, so well done....not read you before, cheers and welcome...very cool post, have a good one
Thank you very much Christopher. Very kind of you. I actually joined back in 2013 but forgot about this site as I got very busy. I received an email today from this site and thought I'd take a look at what is was I signed up for. I regret not getting more into back then but very happy I received this email. Thank you for your kindness. Have a great one yourself. Look forward to reading everything here.
such a sad write. beautifully composed. Happy Holidays to you and yours
Lisa
Thank you, Lisa. It is very sad but it is, unfortunately, too often someone's story. Have a very Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.