Poem - 04 February 2021, 11:39

Soaring Journey

The mist glistening on my glowing skin,
I felt the shaft of lightning pierce my frame!
The jolt folding me like flapping tin!
Launching ever higher; my heart a flame!

I've reached the billowing clouds of static,
Harmonizing with the ever growing light.
Though splintering through the stormy attic!
Trailing off on the mushrooming sprite.

Gliding down from tremendous height!
Though forming ice; I can not be cooled!
Never have I felt anything so very right!
Welling up; my bloodstream; passion pooled!

A soaring journey and climaxed finesse!
From three words," I love you" and a simple caress!

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Romance Sonnet

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Passion

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Jim "The Lad" ....04 February 2021, 13:05

Thank you Hj ! I'm not trying to become a passion writer, lol! I just tried it out.

The fish of the sea04 February 2021, 13:43

Harmonizing! Bit different from you Jim but I enjoyed it all the same. Hope you are well my land friend. XD. Peace and smiles always. Max

Jim "The Lad" ....04 February 2021, 14:13

Trying new things Max! remember I wrote "Colorful Abyss" so you can't say I am always fishing! sometimes I am swimming as well! XD! Have some compassion! I believe you are bipedal some days until the land shark gets too close!XD! I am well as a landlubber can be lol! I hope you are not swimming off too soon! and that you are well! give Luma my best!....................Jim ....PS light and music are both waves!

Shaun Cronick04 February 2021, 14:38

Jim a great well written write with a ending and poet would have dearly loved to write. Those three most cherished and magical words so neatly and wonderfully woven in. Loved it!
Five worthy stars and deservedly pinned for a reread.
And your choice of image is the icing on the cake for a touch of poetry touch of class.
Thank you for writing and sharing.

Jim "The Lad" ....04 February 2021, 15:04

Thanks bunches for the pin Shaun, not my usual topic but it worked in my sonnet format as I tried new stuff.

David Roberts04 February 2021, 19:03

Awwwr what a great write

Jim "The Lad" ....04 February 2021, 19:11

thank you David ! you have some great stuff! Most proud of my poem" Glory Unfolded"...........................................................................Jim