Poem -
Spellbound................................................................Dedicated to Vien
Her eyes melted my confidence; a weakened volcano overflowing!
Our connected minds; as a mother's hand on child, my thoughts; her knowing.
My edges glowed like burning paper ash; floating from a fire!
My body heat began to rise like an eagle; soaring ever higher!
I lifted off the floor, drifting toward her; like a soft balloon in the breeze,
Then trapped by her heart, my hungered longing will, fell to its knees!
In a dream like state, yearning passion, never wanting to wake or be found!
My heart shuttered; like a climbing airplane in a stall! I was spellbound!
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WONDERFUL POEM
Thank you Greg!
The title grabbed me, Jim! And then as I read the poem I was so glad I found this. Fabulous poem. Love certainly gets you spellbound. Awesome poem my friend 👏👏👏 x
Thank you Being me! you and your poems put me in a spell! trying to grab you!
Wow Jim!!! Absolutely fantastic ..your best I think. A truly magical write!! Pinned x
Means a lot coming from you, however I think you like romance over my self help writes, lol! I don't think I have many of these in me! lol! thank you for the support!....note to self....win the ladies with romance! lol!
Thanks Jim my lad for taking me to that land of enchantment ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💕❤️💕
so glad Jill you thought it enchanting!
Wow... a bit off topic for you.. subtly erotic 😱
nice work..
Thanks JP! yea,I am multi faceted! lol!
you guys tried to put me in a box! lol! thanks for the comments and support! I appreciate it!...........................Jim
I love this poem, the words brought me to an entirely different world. You are a truly wonderful writer! I love your work...................... Belle
Thank you BelleBelle!
Thank you Baker Street for the read and support!
I hope she exists, out of imagination and by your side if you wish.
You are so sweet Liliana! thank you!
Wowww the heat of passion and infatuation portrayed in a sensational fabulous poetic way, enjoyed it. Ok tell us this is real. Kudos!!
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thank you for your comments!
Fantastic poem Jim. Incredibly descriptive and romantic moving piece. I felt the power. I love this one!! I am spellbound❤☀❤
so glad you read and found it pleasing!
Absolutely beautiful,,sensual, so passionate full of feeling .. love this .
thank you Carol Anne!
Just magic! Loved it Jim! Plus the title drew me in! Px
Pratibha! thank you so much for the support!
There ya go Jim ..
this technology thing is really summat else isn't it ..
I told you I was gonna dig this one out and I'm so glad I did ..
Your 'Spellbound' was really quite magical and took this reader on something almost akin to his own astral journey ..
Indeed, every now and then, I come face to face with certain words that have the golden touch of witchcraft, sorcery and poetry seamlessly interwoven throughout ...
In a word, quite simply magik mate ............................ Neville :)
You are awesome Neville! thank you!