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Standing Still At The Waters Of Our Awakening

Jill Tait's Slow Down Please Challenge

Standing Still At The Waters Of Our Awakening

It shouldn't take a storm or fever
To acquire depths of the translucent sea
And comprehend that we belong
To something profound and so much deeper
Wherein the still and the silence
Reflection is found
And pollution; the nightmare
From which we awaken again to dream

It shouldn't take death's grip to remind us
How life is precious
But seldom can it be lived in the moment
Saving you cherish death as much as fear can own it
And you've let more than enough love for a lifetime in
But nothing greater than a floodΒ 
To cleanse the sickness inside us
When what it takes, will take us away
At the waters of our awakening
And against the tides of standing still
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Being Me

Ian, this is a fabulous poem. And it is so right!Β  Β 

Β It shouldn't take a storm or fever
To acquire depths of the translucent sea
And comprehend that we belong
To something profound and so much deeper

And yet this alwsys seems to be the case. I really hope lessons have been learned and people will continue to feel more connected.Β 

This is so well written x

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Ian William

Thank you ever so much!Β  I deeply appreciate it! I don't know if it's too late for this challenge,Β  I only started writing about an hour ago and hope to catch up shortly.

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Simon Bromley

Welcome back Ian! What a fantastic piece of writing, awesome work.

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Ian William

Thank you So much Simon! I wouldn't have done anything if you didn't encourage me yesterday, so thanks again! I hope to catch up with you all shortly.

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Ian William

Thank you very much Poetes! Just finishing your challenge, will post it soon and comment on your latest poems!
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Ian William

Thank you very much Pratibha! I greatly appreciate you taking the time!

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