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Stimulating Day

Stimulating Day

Traveled out to the golf course,
Looking forward to it all week!
Not playing well; but no remorse,
Descent on the fairway, putting bleak!

Enjoyed the outdoors and the game!
The company I was with, the best!
Weather great! conversation the same,
Front nine done, picking up the rest.

Stopped at the club house for drinks,
Chose a hot dog and a soda pop.
What fun we're having on the links!
My list of days; this was at the top!

Then I took a swig of my D.P.,
This was the end of my golfing play!
I swallowed my drink and a honey bee!
Finished the nine and a stimulating day!
 

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Jill Tait

Sounds like great day thisun I used to play a little golf but got sore back n not for couple years tho kept bag o clubs lol x❤️💕❤️Pinned 

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Jill Tait

You so welcome Jim my lad ❤️💕❤️

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Shelley-anne St...

Love it Jim, I am right there with you sipping on my DrP too 😜 great write

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Shaun Cronick

Nicely well written and presented Jim and that Dr Pepper was a bee magnet.
And here's to teeing off hopefully earlier this year than later.
Thanks for sharing and full marks and eagles all-round.
 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Haha Shaun! thank you, hey I added a bunch to "Moon of Sorrow" you might be surprised! the spirits acted! lol!

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Greg, that does my heart good that it helped! and I have a very damaged heart! so thank you very much!..this actually happened several years ago, I can't play golf anymore........................Jim

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Being Me

Love it!  Dont they say in the adverts, What's the worse that can happen?  Well, I'd say one of the worst things is taking a swig of bee infused drink, cant blame the bee though...Dr Pepper is awesomely delicious 😜😜  Love the poem Jim x

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Your comments and reading is so! appreciated Being Me! thank you!......Jim

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Yiyan Han

Like your humour, Jim, "Weather great" shows in the accompanying image ;)

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sparrowsong

Hello Jim "THE LAD"...

I'm glad your mouth didn't swell up like a grapefruit...

​ Great fun write!

Although, I'm sorry you don't play Golf anymore but, also thankful for the warning to...

WATCH OUT FOR BEES!!

​​​​​This made my day too...

​​​​​​Thank you very much for the laugh....

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong
 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Glad I could lighten your heart! It actually happened a few years ago, and no I really wasn't hurt. and sparrow, you can call me Jim! lol!

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Carol Anne

Love this 
I could actually feel the happy 😆 day and the bee unfortunately . Loved this .. 😊

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