Storm

The air is thick with anticipation,
I try to breathe in but it swells in my throat,
I let the anticipation flood my body,
Forced to hold my breath
Black clouds gather ominously,
An excited, muffled murmur resonating from the heavy sky
The birds in the trees fall silent,
As the sunshine betrays them and slinks away
The hairs on my arms prickle and begin to stand on end,
As electrical tendrils caress my limbs
Every thing is silent...even the wind holds it's breath...
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Hey JAYNE!!....what I LOVE about this piece is its continuity.....the way it paints the intent of what the title suggests!!.....it does it with great word choices that imbue your phrasing with that perfect feeling that we all can relate to when we think of the word "STORM"!!......Well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!.....ALL STARS!!......high fives!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?ââ´âł
Thanks Tony.. I was trying to capture that silent moment, the anticipation before a storm...not only a storm in reailty but in a metaphorical sense aswell. love and rockets xxÂ