The Storm

The sky was black with rage
as the rain lashed down
winds blasting from the west
as the earth starts to drown
batten down the hatches
this storm will be so fierce
many trees bent over
howling gales that pierce
brollies turned inside out
this storm`s so frightening
skies dark just like night time
lit up by flash lightning
best to be inside now
as the storm rages on
we`re safe from the torrentÂ
`til the light of the dawn.....
© Lissie Bull 2016
Image found on Bristol Post
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Hello Lissie, how you been? Enjoyed the frightful imagery on the telling of your storm. How it ravishes through cities and towns, those close to water get flooding and anything not as you described batten down will be destroyed. Mother Nature has quite the temper tantrums lol. Good write, I enjoyed the read.
Hi Lissie,
I agree with Devon on this piece. The descriptions through your writing are so clear and vibrant for the reader and this is a very enjoyable piece. The storms of recent times have been terrible and my heart goes out to those that have suffered through them. A lot of our local countryside has suffered greatly, especially the Lake District which is such a stunningly beautiful masterpiece of Mother Nature to behold. This piece is well written and well described. Well done for another wonderful piece for us all.
God bless and keep you safe.
G xx