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Strange Beings 1

Senselessness

Strange Beings 1

Half-finished poems
I see all over
Swimming in senselessness
All overĀ 
Red rover

They seem to have their voices
Like characters in a book
Calling out pick meĀ 
Pick meĀ 

My head shook

Cus I`m looking for something
That only calls my nameĀ 
They're lonely and afraidĀ 
Each and every day

And I`m swimming in the senselessness
That will only go my way
The tides ebb and flow
Light through the darkness of pain

And as the fog gets thickerĀ 
Cut it with a knifeĀ 
Sirens sound warning
WarningĀ 
Ending of a lifeĀ 

So drip
Stand not sit
Give a bit
Save my voiceĀ 

When it matters
I`ll beat it.
The Fish of the Sea.

Ā 

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The fish of the sea

Thanks, Pure! Haven't seen you in a while, my friend! I just saw your poem, haven't checked it out yet. Be there soon. Kind regards. TFOTS

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Marion

Confusion confusion...that's what I get reading this. I'm not sure what it's about but it conveyed a feeling of uncertainty...hugs šŸ’•

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The fish of the sea

Agreed Marion, nor do I really know what its about XD. I`m glad you liked it though~ Hugs to you Marion. Kind regards. TFOTS

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Marion

I didn't mean I'm confused...I meant the emotion I got from the work was confusion...lol...just to clarify šŸ¤—

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The fish of the sea

XD Its fine Marion, no harm no foul, just something that came to me in the shower lol. Kind regards. TFOTS

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Jim "The Lad" ....

What speaks to me is what I call the "still small voice" and I recognize it instantly ,then I can move forward at a rapid rate! That is what your poem speaks to me about. enjoyed ! hope my humble interpretation doesn't fly in your face! your poet friend!..............................Jim

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The fish of the sea

Hi Jim! I can definitely see it being perceived that way, the poems so new to me, literally a personal best from thought to publish, that I`m not even really sure the way I want to look at it. Lol. Think it has to do with indecision, anxiety and confusion to me, but eh, poetry is an art after all! Best wishes, your friend. TFOTS

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The fish of the sea

We all see Poetry differently Jim, no harm no foul my friend XD. Kind regards. TFOTS

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Being Me

There is a definite feeling of helplessness in this poem. Hope all is okay with you, Fish x

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The fish of the sea

Hi Tina, very true, means more to me in that way these days... but I`m fine XD. I`ll be alright after I have my exams... seem to be the source of my stress and lack of activity at the moment... Kind regards. TFOTS

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