Poem -
The Stuff That Ruins Me
There is a part of me that wants peace
A part of me that wants war
A Piece of me wants to be clean
A Piece of Me that wants more
I Just want a taste- enough is enough
But not for me, I'm Obsessed with this stuff
I can attempt to embrace my spirituality
It is Tough and it is Trumped by so much apathy
A destructive pulse the size of New York
A dream is what I need to find washed up on the shore
I deliver this to you to quiet the blue
Ventilate my rage- what should I do?
I write these words for you to think, feel, and believe
Can you relate to my thoughts in this universe of greed?
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Keith..
Already hear you mate...loud and clear!...
Like your style and flow..
What you have to say...I get just so!..You are definately one to watch for me..Big thumbs up and vote here my friend :) x
Thank You Much!
Really like this one Keith, loved the opening to it,
and for me that is half the battle to capture the reader's eye and draw them into your write. Â Nice rhyme and flow, great job. Â Congrats on your nomination, a vote from me too:)
Thank You for the feedback and support!
Good write, Congrats on your winning nomination
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
thank you
This is amazing, I love the pace you achieve especially :)Â
thank you, I'm Glad you like it.
You're a legend buddy, keep writing, Â you're a master at keeping readers hooked.Â
Eden
why thank you sweet heart ;)