Poem -
Suburban Sunflower
The moment that she bit
deep into her
ripe city peach like that ..
Was the very
same moment, he closed
both his eyes
and imagined handfuls of
apricots and a
single suburban sunflower ..
It was also
then that he realised it was
raining, he was
no longer starving, but yet
still hungry
for a small portion of her ..
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Comments
Hi Neville,
the visual imagery is just flawless. Desire is such an individual thing but I can see how that hunger can be transformed into another need or yearning.
brilliantly done
Lorna xx
Glad you share the same corner & see it my way Lorna .. Thank you muchly xx
Hello Nev...
I commented on this earlier...
Got shot out again...
I will just say...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
Thank you sparrowsong, second visits always have twice the impact .. please feel able to elaborate on what you mean by shot out .. Neville