Succubus
You lie there in your bed,
dark, ruthlessโlike mescaline.
Where a lone ghost is laid,
and other ghosts convene.
I hear you moan and gasp,
your pleasure in the deep haven.
You reach for what you cannot grasp
like a dark and ancient raven.
Your body, once enthralled
wakes unto the chains it wore.
Disheveledโฆstupidโฆenwalled
thus, famished, as before.
And I, proud paragon,
breathe in the ghostly air.
Like anonymous carrion,
so ravished by despair.
This child, hateโs harlot
so devilishly vile.
Pure evil incarnate
With bloodied lips, she smiles.
And I, mere mortal,
am powerless to resist.
Now enter into a portal
spurred by the Devilโs kissโฆ
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Comments
Great write, better a succubus than an incubus.
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Thanks very much for reading and commenting, Ian.
I deeply appreciate your feedback.
Warmest wishes,
~Dean
Big fan of this one Dean! I can truly feel your every word..ย
Mโโโuch love and keep on keeping on!ย
You humble me with your thoughtful comments, OsirisMistress.
Thank you so much for reading, I am very grateful for your review.
Pleasant Screams!
~Deanย ? ? ?
Dear Dean,
This sibling from the bowels of Hell
Far more deadly does she be
Than her twin, the incarnate Incubus
She, the Succubus, came to me
.
Against her powers, I am defenseless
With this mere mortal, she has her way
Powerless, I succumb to her
She devours me every day
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Your poem hereโit's very good, Larry.
I think you should post it.
Love and peace, my friend, and thanks again for reading my morbid musings.
~Deanย โ ๏ธโฐ๏ธโ ๏ธ
Dear Dean,
Thank you for your lovely words on my poetic comment, but I would not feel right posting it, because it is merely a reflection of the powerful thoughts and words that you created.ย ย
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx