Sugar
Sweet Temptation
She entices to draw you in for the craving
as that shift in thought begins to succumb.
To taste that sweet seduction like non - other,
she begins her mission to indulge you in flavor.
The game is a torrent as desire tries to control the urge.
It is time again for her haunting, a game for the senses.
Your mind tries to blacken her effect,
but her grip continues showering light.
Smooth, her skin shimmers velvet, her lips bright like cherry
and a scent that breezes the air with the smell of ecstasy.
You welcome her into the occasion knowing that regret follows.
Again you will taste the enemy of health that surges your veins
An open invitation of sweet, where resistance is beaten
You have allowed her to borrow your time,
because desert has finally arrived.
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A BEAUTIFULLY poetic seduction........ delivered with VERY well conceived and tastefully charged word choices that are TRULY compelling...... the phrasing here flows like a stream of beauty....... and a kindness that steals the intent running throughout....... and turns it into passionate imagery that sticks in the minds eye of the reader ~
~ "Smooth, her skin shimmers velvet, her lips bright like cherry
And a scent that breezes the air with the smell of ecstasy..."
Your pen is on fire dear poet sister!!....... and I feel most fortunate to have come across this piece of truly artistic poetic prose today!!......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!......... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLLY delivered!!...... Bravo!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo. : )
Thank you so much for your encouraging words Tony. I don’t get much feedback on my work anymore, so your opinion has again given me a reason to continue with my writing?