Poem -
Suicide
They say suicide is a crime,
But some don't live in a pleasant time.
Why must we be forced to live when we wish to die?
why must we be forced to hold in these cries?
We live in the land of the free,
but yet we're not allowed to end our misery.
The pain follows us around,
but we can't climb high and fall to the ground.
These rules force us to live,
but what if our lives want to give?
I enjoy the torture and pain,
for without pain, there is no gain.
let the blood drip through my sleeves,
for it's the only outlet it seems.
If I die, I won't care,
for this life is far from fair.
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Comments
Hey girlfriend!!....I don't agree with agree with everything here....BUT.....I DO agree with the heart of ......The right to choose belongs to us, and us alone!!....LOVE the passion and intensity here!!..... this is what poetry is all about!!...... kick ass!!...... FISTFUL-O-STARS!!...... well done my dear poet sister!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?✳✴☀♥
I just looked at the picture and wrote about the ideas that came from it. I don't want to commit suicide or anything, and it's sad when others do. I just like writing about grim things like death. It's easy to do so for me since grim poems are full of emotion. But yes, the decision is up to us. Thank you for your feedback on most of my writing! I really appreciate it!
You are one talented writer. I've got personal history with suicide (runs in my family unfortunately but I've never thought of it) and this captures the emotions I believe some, or rather a lot, people feel when they've made their decision to end it all. Wandering off to read more of your writes! :)
xxxLily
Thanks! I get thoughts rarely, but don't worry think too much of them. I just really enjoy writing about death... like, really enjoy it. Sometimes I wonder if I'm right in the head. Then I remember some of the best stories were written by some what psychos. Like Edgar Allen Poe.
Hope you enjoy the rest of my writing.
wow i almost teared up on that one.