Poem - 12 September 2019, 16:26

Suicide awareness reverse poem (read top to bottom then bottom to top )

I am broken
And I refuse to believe that
Life is beautiful
I want to show you, because
Happiness
Is far from real
I won’t ever see clearly
I know this is the right path, because
Death
Is more significant than
Life
This I believe

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Tragedy

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Jasmine Dryer12 September 2019, 17:26

i loved this piece so much

Zac Bradbury13 September 2019, 02:31

Thank you ?
I'm glad you did ?

Stephen OConnell12 September 2019, 17:27

powerful

Zac Bradbury13 September 2019, 02:33

Thankyou ?

Marion12 September 2019, 22:45

Pure genius when you read both ways...well done! ?

Zac Bradbury13 September 2019, 02:26

Thank you ?

RRG (Rebecca)13 September 2019, 10:02

This is so good. Not just the message but the writing style. Great job. :) Blessings.

Zac Bradbury13 September 2019, 10:28

Thankyou very much
I tried to make it so it has two strong points of two strong feelings which can have completely different outcomes ?

GREG TUCKER THE...13 September 2019, 16:26

Oh this is quite brilliant

Zac Bradbury13 September 2019, 16:40

Thankyou ?

kay harris10 October 2019, 20:02

Congrats my friend, amazing piece, I've almost took my life a few times but I made it out. I sometimes wonder how I made it this far, but I think The man upstairs has better plans with me.. much love friend, An amazing write..

Zac Bradbury22 October 2019, 17:08

Bless you

glad your on the mend

thankyou very much ?