Suicide awareness reverse poem (read top to bottom then bottom to top )

Suicide awareness reverse poem (read top to bottom then bottom to top )

I am broken
And I refuse to believe that 
Life is beautiful 
I want to show you, because
Happiness 
Is far from real
I won’t ever see clearly 
I know this is the right path, because 
Death 
Is more significant than 
Life
This I believe

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Icarus Flocke

quite brilliant zach...sincerely.

my brother committed suicide in 2013.
so this one is very much relevant.

 

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Zac Bradbury

Thank you 
sorry to hear that 
My best friend did the same in 2014 thats what made this poem so important to me 😇

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Marion Price

Pure genius when you read both ways...well done! 🌹

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RRG (Rebecca)

This is so good. Not just the message but the writing style. Great job. :) Blessings.

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Zac Bradbury

Thankyou very much 
I tried to make it so it has two strong points of two strong feelings which can have completely different outcomes 😇

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kay harris

Congrats my friend, amazing piece, I've almost took my life a few times but I made it out. I sometimes wonder how I made it this far, but I think The man upstairs has better plans with me.. much love friend, An amazing write.. 

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Zac Bradbury

Bless you 

glad your on the mend 

thankyou very much 😇

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