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Sunday Musings: Williamsji Maveli

Sunday Musings:  Williamsji Maveli

Sunday Musings: 2   By Williamsji

Sunday, 27th April, 2014

  • My Sunday Day Greetings to COSMOFUNNEL Administration, to all authors, artistes and viewers

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SYNOPSIS: This is my weekend writing column for a review of a poem from a selected author. This Column is being titled as " Sunday Musings " with a view to feature an in-depth analysis of  any one of the poems from the previous weeks winning nominations, selected by me at random to avoid the elaborate review or comment postings  by me in the usual comments column. Cherie Sumner's almost all poems are great success and have won the nominations; hence it was very difficult to choose the best one for my review. However, I shall plan this column in such a way to accommodate almost all style of poems by all poets and poetess of COSMOFUNNEL, which I hope will give more room for encouragement and inspirations to write. The poems selected are purely from my own liking and discretion and has nothing to do with the ratings, voting and nomination aspects. Hope, readers will understand my view point and enjoy my writing. My views and interpretations in this column are purely my own observations, and it has nothing to do with the personal life of the author of the poem.  I am eager to read your feed-backs.  The second poem which  I take-up is this

  • Title: Electric Rhythm
  • Author : Cherie Sumner
  • Posted on  April 22, 2014
  • No of Viewers: 865
  • No of Comments : 30
  • No of Votes: 14

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The poem by Poetess Cherie Sumner is a fabulous depiction of an erotic, sensual, symbolic one, which attracts almost all the readers or viewers. Sex is not a forbidden habit or nature of human or animals, It is a natural, ordinary expression of body and mind, like we all become wet or sweat due to climatic conditions, An act of sex, either in a castle or in a hut will have the same effect body-wise or physical aspirations of the humans.  

Here, the state of undressing is not depicted in an unattractive way; it is part of life, like any other entertainment both for body as well as soul, hence acceptable. Our bodily behaviors and other modifications are part of a concept and syntax of sexual intercourse which may be described or defined by different words, including, a coming together or joining together or to embracing together. Treat sex as a vital exercise like yoga, fitness etc. I really enjoyed the entertainment part which is not a bad concept in the modern society. It is always better to express and expose, rather than to suppress and substitute. This is a wonderful write no doubt about it. Nothing to be ashamed in posting this style of verses, as these are objectives of nature and humans

Poetess Cherie Sumner is always trying to challenge herself with her distinct and experimental   writing, and I found this poem is amusing, alluring, fun, exciting and erotic write.  As a modern and outstanding Poetess of love and ecstasy, she never needs to be isolated t o a certain category type writers.  Her poetic and even erotic concepts have equipped her to explore un limited horizons.  Appreciations like this and supports like good criticisms contributes   very positive approach by the writers and thorough different analysis, it uplift the writer overall, which encourages, further more to keep exploring in her future writings.

It is not very amazing that women are overall less interested in having masculinity everyday compared to men.  While sex is suppose to be pleasurable, some are just not into it at some moments. However, not being in the mood for eternity is just not healthy. If you feel you've lost interest in sex altogether then it may be time to visit your doctor. In this poem "Electric Rhythms", the musical instrument is a sex symbol of masculine power, the way the instrument is being held is very poetical. The instrument is laid in between the beautiful breasts of the feminine lovable body part. There is no body in the world who doesn't like to nurture the breasts of women, it is quite natural, Why new born babies long for nipples of the mothers, it is quench their thirst, even grownup children used to pull and fondle Mom's breasts, which is a natural instinct.

 A woman trying to balance a family and at the same time work is highly likely to suffer from stress. Juggling both of these inefficiently can increase anxiety thus affecting the mood for sex. The last thing that a woman would like to think about when they've work so hard during the day while taking care of their kids is to have sex.  The body just cannot deal with it even though sex is supposed to release all that tension in you.  Working smartly while having enough rest can be a simple solution to this problem. A Lack of rest or sleep can greatly affect sexual drive.  When the body is not well rested, hormones can go haywire leaving women uneasy and irritable.Best of Luck dear Poetess Cherie Sumner, Happy writings @ Cosmofunnel, Congratulations

My tribute verse to beloved Poetess Cherie Sumner:

  • " Let me paint her with vibrant shades;
  • Lovable beauty in vivid color, besides;
  • She loves to scribble passionate verses;
  • Her hobby is to nurture and kiss horses;
  • To me, she is a splashing wildest stream;
  •  Still in love with her own fantasy dreams;
  • She pours in me like a dawn's misty flowers;
  • Enclose; embrace; body is wet in her showers;
  • Trust in her magical writing skills and powers;
  • Like an angel, She comes for spiritual covers "

- WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

williamsji@yahoo.com

  • PO BOX 3, Angamaly, 683572
  • Ernakulam, Kerala, India

NOTE: The next " Sunday Musings " will continue on May 04, 2014 with a poem of another Cosmofunnel writer. Readers, Authors  are welcome with their valuable  comments, both positive and negative  on this column - WILLIAMSJI

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Dear Curtis,

I am happy at least someone has come to the forefront with a support on my " Sunday Musings-2 ", highlighting Poetess Cherie Sumner's poem titled " Electric Rhythms " . Thanks for your valuable comments. What I am aiming is to bring up the standard of the poems after its analysis and "get to know " the author along with their poems or art.

Poetry analysis or review , also sometimes referred to as a poem evaluation, is a mirror image on a poem that involve, analyzing, appreciating  the poetic instincts and methods or a  discussion, compared to the language and current trends of literature and art. It is the summary of the style, language and the images or symbols used by the author, as well as sharing one’s personal position on the poem. When it comes to poetry analysis, one has to go beyond just reviewing the words and phrases used, but instead see the bigger picture, try to read "between the lines" and understand what has driven the poet to use a particular word combination. Thus, poetry analysis requires some primary research on the author of the poem, as well as some background and history behind the poem’s creation.

There are many poems which has caught my attention from many authors of COSMOFUNNEL and there  are being wait-listed or  in my Queue , and I just started as a beginning, moreover, I have a plan to bring to light the hidden meanings, from the poems of famous writers, like William Shakespeare, Christina Rosette, William Wordsworth etc. with another column, which is in my pipe-line titled as " Between the Lines ", On successful development and appreciation of " Sunday Musings " , I shall start with the above column, provided COSMOFUNNEL approves it .

Thanks for your support, Regards, Love WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Dear Merrill Augustus,

Thanks for your valuable comments on SUNDAY MUSINGS,

Regards

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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