Poem - 25 September 2018, 09:39

Surely There Is More To Life Than This?

Michael Champion

Waking
Dressing
Eating
Working

Eating
Drinking
Sleeping badly.

Waking
Dressing
Eating
Working

Eating
Drinking
Sleeping badly.

Surely there is more to life than this?

MDC

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Tony Taylor25 September 2018, 11:36

Hi MICHAEL!!...there is powerful creativity in the way that this formatted dear poet brother....the repetition works perfectly and sets up the reader for a truly clever message!!......ALL STARS!!......Bravo my friend!!.......Love & Rockets!!......T xo ?✴???

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