Poem -

Surely There Is More To Life Than This?

author
Michael Champion

Waking
Dressing
Eating
Working

Eating
Drinking
Sleeping badly.

Waking
Dressing
Eating
Working

Eating
Drinking
Sleeping badly.

Surely there is more to life than this?

MDC

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Despair Existence
Poetry Genre: 
Freestyle
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Tony Taylor

Hi MICHAEL!!...there is powerful creativity in the way that this formatted dear poet brother....the repetition works perfectly and sets up the reader for a truly clever message!!......ALL STARS!!......Bravo my friend!!.......Love & Rockets!!......T xo ?✴???

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