Poem -
Suspended In Disbelief
Heads buried deep below,this paranoia is taking hold
Did we eat too many shrooms or smoke a laced hemp crooked cigarette too ?
On the brink of dehydration nothing to quench this agonizing thirst
As the man takes count of the bodies in this earthy stay
She walks by collecting the souls that wronged the king along the way
As clouds build up above this darkened sky ,feeling lucky just to be alive
This rain will give relief to those still suspended in a dreamlike state of disbelief
Praying ,clinging to God's saving grace,enduring pain ready to surrender to heaven's holy gate
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Hey ROCK!!........ this reminds me of "Caligula"............ where he buries men up to their necks in the town square and then chops off all their heads......... very cool write bro.........I like the way you left it open for interpretation............ high fives bro!!............T xo
Hey t I have read about that mean man .he was crazy . I just loved the picture and the words started flowing like a river ,.I always like leaving the reader hanging to their own interpretations . Thanks for your comments. My respect bradford
good stuff, Hardrocklover....I like this poetic Jambalaya you cooked up here, friend....smells like, justice and revenge and a whole lotta passion, reads like you`re writing free -style walking close to the edge of the cliff pushing against order and perceived reality, very raw freaking poetry....held the reader, bro....keep kickin arse and taking names....go HRL!
Hey Chris thanks for your cool friggin comments. I will try to keep kicking that ass . I loved this picture and I let my mind do the rest . I love keeping the reader engaged otherwise they will fall asleep. Much respect to you rock
I watched Jeremiah Johnson the other night
This reminded me of the part where the guy was buried
Neck deep, because he had no hair to scalp, by the Indians
But the morale of the movie stands out most
One soul seeking freedom and peace, living in the mountains
And those of violent nature, or payback retrospect
Just couldn't leave him be, so he killed many in self protection
Some where also payback for the deaths of those he loved
Non of them wanted peace, so peace never came
One link, joins everything together
Yet the missing link is in everyone unwilling
Much love nardine.
Hey Nardine I have not seen that movie in a while but I will look into it . I remember watching the new long ranger movie with Johnny Depp and he and Tonto were buried up to their necks with scorpions on top of their heads very creepy . Much love back to you bradford
HARD CORE!! and not at the same time
Did we eat too many shrooms or smoke a laced hemp crooked cigarette too ?
Hey mark thanks. Your comments put a smile on my face . Cheers to you rock