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Suwannee River

Suwannee River

As i saw the dawnĀ  then the sun came up
Way down upon the Suwannee River
I ate some liver it didn’t make me
Quiver a breeze came up
It made me shiver way down
Upon the Suwannee River

Way down upon the Suwannee River
Where are the old folks told me jokes
I sat by this old oakĀ Ā tree
Ā listening to the young folks
Play their Ā musicĀ  singing and dance

Way down upon the Suwannee River
As the sunsets and the moon
And the stars shine bright
Oh how I love you Suwannee River
Way down upon the Suwannee River
Ā 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

love it Greg!.............................................................................................Jim

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Neville

Most chuckleworthy Greg .. Made me chuckle anyway :)Ā 

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Neville

my pleasure .. have a great week my friend ..

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Shaun Cronick

Greg this has a hint or two of Huckleberry Finn and Tom Sawyer vibe to your engaging poem.
And a pleasant feel good feel to it, to feel good with after reading.
You certainly are nature's observer and I wish you well.
And congratulations on publishing your Amazon book and with nature in its title...
THE POETRY OF GREG ETSELL: THE BEST POETRY COLLECTIONS ON NATURE AND EVERYDAY WORLDĀ 
And a damned good read it is throughout Greg.

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Shaun Cronick

Greg and may God Bless you too.
Now we're both covered.

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