Sweet Jasmine: An Eerie English Sonnet

'Twixt twilight's smooth black velvet evening gown,
yon daybreak sings its soothing songs to me.
The stoutest ale my pain could never drown,
I beseech thee, death; yeild thy hold on me.
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'Twas on the morrow, I would soon be wed,
yet fickle fate stepped in to intervene;
as sickness rendered my sweet Jasmine dead,
and here, bereft, I'm sallowed, in between.
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Her sapphire eyes will shine bright, nevermore;
'tis death that stole their gorgeous gleam away.
He whisked my love away to gloomy shore,
as death declare—I rue this woeful day!
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Should ferryman be anchored, far or near —
I beg he takes me to my Jasmine dear.

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Comments
Good poetry, as always. :)
Delivered with flair, gusto, verve, reason, passionate energy and deep resolve to further artistic standards and public interest. Great spirit with a work ethic to match reaps its rewards, in clear phrasing tied to sound structure.
Well written, as usual.
Take care, friend.
:)
Thanks very much for the glowing review, Richard.
As always, I sincerely appreciate you as well as your time.
Take care, my friend.
~Dean
Hi, Dean!
I enjoyed reading your "eerie" sonnet, as well as the structure and flow of your words! The deep love and adoration for, Jasmine, and the painful loss comes bleeding through.
:(
Take care,
LindiÂ
Thank you, Lindi.
I had Poe's poem Annabelle Lee in mind as I wrote this.
Hence, the sadness for a man's lost love figured prominently in this poem as well.
I appreciate your read & review.
Have a wonderful weekend.
~Dean :)
Written beautifully!!!! You are very welcome!!!
Enjoy your weekend! ?
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Beautiful Write brother
Thanks for the comments, Greg.
It's appreciated.
~Dean
Amazing sonnet..
loved it
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment, Leah.
I sincerely appreciate it.
~Dean ?