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SWEET VALENTINE

SWEET VALENTINE

Sweet valentine; oh valentine

My love for you lives on

I loved you for eternity

I love you now you’re gone

Sweet valentine; my valentine

A single rose that I placed down

When your chariot came to carry you

To your new life in the ground

Sweet valentine; lost valentine

I mourn your loving touch

Miss your breath; your smell; your everything

Want you back so very much

Sweet valentine; sad valentine

This ache is breaking me

I’ve tried my life without you

But it was never meant to be

Sweet valentine; sweet valentine

The rose you took with you

Filled the place I have now come to take

So one can now be two ............

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BLOSSOM

Thanks Valerie, your comments are always much appreciated:)

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Jason Lee

Beautiful, touching piece Rachel, it made me want to pick up the phone and call my wife, can't imagine having to feel that loss, 5*s from me X:)

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Jai Masters

"I’ve tried my life without you

But it was never meant to be

Sweet valentine; sweet valentine"

so beautiful the way you write!

Luv from Jai :) 

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BLOSSOM

Cheers Jai, your kind comments are much appreciated :)

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BLOSSOM

Ah cheers Jason, it must be heartbreaking, I couldn't imagine it either! Thanks for the stars lol :)x

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