-T-i-g-h-t-r-o-p-e-

The chord unravels as they travel along
wondering where things went so terribly wrong.
Below is a seemingly endless pit,
once fallen, any possible emergence from it?
Crossing the abyss is their sole ambition; from this solemn state help them find remission. Negative thoughts are loudly voicing...
the devil sneers amidst rejoicing.
Desperately searching for some solution
avoidance of an institution.
Continuing on with a smile of plaster--
one
little
slip
could spell disaster.
Anxiety blanketing every thought
so tired now and completely distraught.
Although the outer shells put up a fight
they begin to wither to Satan's delight.
Wiping out joy like a rampant fire
this beast strips its victims of all desire.
Burning all goodness along its path
leaving smoldering remnants in the aftermath.
It's a no-holds-barred mental course
ripping at normalcy with an F5 force.
Damaging the fragile parts unseen
sanity & insanity, little space between.
If only we could walk alongside
and squelch the chaos they attempt to hide.
Anguish almost too much to bear
evil & the mind, such a wicked affair.
Living on the edge of crumbling sanity
in the gnarly grip of the dark one's vanity.
Like a balloon devoid of all its air,
deflated....in a state of complete despair.
Is mental transplant a viable choice?
then depression would surely lose its voice.
From this bondage may they all be freed,
given the relief they so desperately need.
For my Dad...
(and all who suffer from depression/anxiety)

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Comments
Very powerful piece Jacki.....I like the form, the strong sentiment and the rhymes.
Mick.
Thanks, Mizzy! This one is close to my heart... Hard to watch someone sinking in mental quicksand...
Its an amazing capture of words that make this so intense. I love your teetering on the edge
one
little
slip
could spell disaster.
I really enjoyed Jacki this xx
Thanks so much, Lorna! My Dad is trapped in mental quicksand right now and I feel like I'm watching and have nothing to offer for him to pull himself out. This poem is my attempt to portray what deep depression could feel like. Thanks for the feedback!*!*!
Jacki
You can't be pulled out of depression Jacki. Just be there for him however you can be! Xx
I'm trying Lorna...it's all very trying...
It is Jacki it's difficult to deal with ..It hurts others around you, and makes people leave and not want to stay!! yet light does find you again...Just it varies on how long it takes, being there is all you can be!! Xxx