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Ten Thousand Words

Songs

Ten Thousand Words

Transverse waves of sound,
Colours, flashing,
Fireworks all around.

Oh take me on a journey,
Crossing the water’s edge.
Sand under my feet, I`m learning…

On my toes,
Watching the lines, beats and rhythm,
As it goes.

Pictures of a thousand words,
My memory seems to serve.
To put it in understanding,
Is what it deserves.

This raw passion to connect,
To grasp the aspect,

The emotion-filled beauty,
That can touch and enlighten.
Making me feel acutely,
That I`m swimming,

Through the music.
The Fish of the Sea

 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Love the poem! Some old people have to come up for air in the music waves XD Great presentation and concept Max! Your friend!.....................Jim...................................HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!

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The fish of the sea

XD! We are all swimming aren't we Jim! Thanks so much though, got triggered by listening to my Spotify wrapped! And no you won't find that account under Fish lol sorry XD. Happy new year to you my friend. Max

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al Bikaadi

Ah.... what a place. You took me to that start of a new journey. Well done! 

SHALOM

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The fish of the sea

Awww thanks so much Al Bikaadi! It means a lot, journey's and connections are all I hope to create ;). Peace and smiles to you my friend. Max

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Being Me

swimming through the music

I like that idea and line! This is very, very good Max. Lots of imagery and emotion well expressed in this. Awesome work! x

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The fish of the sea

Awww wow Tina! Thanks so much! I'm really glad this sparked somthing for you. Really it means a great deal. Peace to you my friend! Kind regards, your friend Max 

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Yiyan Han

The photo does make the place wonder.

PS 2020-12-31
Aussie is already in the next year!
Wish you a New Year be peaceful and healthy wherever you are.

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The fish of the sea

Agreed Yiyan! Yet it took me so very long to find.. I'm glad you liked it my friend. Smiles always. The Fish of the Sea 

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