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Thank You God

Thank You God

The heavenly father adores us, he never ignores us, he knows our work is flawless, we unlocked are mind like a fortress, now he looks down an appluads us, a spirit connection draws us

he sends angels down for protection, prepares our ressurrection, blesses us with affection, ready for the crossovers intersection, one by one random selection, when its are time hes got our attention, free from earths detention, what a creative way of intervention

life never ends, as our sould descends, sins are forgiven an made amends, for were all family & friends, except for evil to hell he sends, no act on show he never pretends, too the good an helping hand he lends, the bad get driven & thrown round twisted bends

we are all immortal, our spirit drifts through another portal, able to breath without a snorcle, no water can drown us thats forceful, gods loving and thoughtful, he knows earth's corrupt an awful, an for that he knows were remorseful

the world was once a perfect creation, till evil lurked in every nation, an started its demonic invasion, but gods got another work station, Β a much bigger much better preperation, for when our spirit becomes a seperation, from our physical works dedication

Thank you god....

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Wayne Stubbs

Excellent James, very creative and great choice of rhyming words ???

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James unsworth

Thank you wayne my pleasure, thank you also for a positive comment, glad you enjoyed reading my friend ??

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Tony Taylor

WOW!!Β  AMEN!! Sir JAMES!!...... when you read this aloud... it becomes powerfully rhythmic in its cadence...... Much like a Gregorian Chant would... or as a modern day Rap Song would...... Hammering theΒ backbeat in the rhyme scheme each time with perfect timing and carrying the intent of the author with to the forefront and allowing the continuity of the message to shine through!!....... great stuff dear poet brother!!......ALL STARS!!...... well done!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!.....T xo

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James unsworth

Thank you tony, thanks for dropping by with those words you so praise upon on my page its an honour once again, im glad you could feel the passion an the way it lyrically flowed, god bless you, James ??

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