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That Poem You Have Always Wanted

All of my friends want to say
That you have always been beneath me
Well, it turns out they were right

It's time for me to go away
So here is that gods damned poem
That you have been begging me to write

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Rory McGinlay

Sounds legit. Even more, sounds like a McGinlay. 🤔

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Twilla Carpenter

ffs, sorry, lol. That should have been extremely obvious. I will stop by between working and see this for myself. 

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Bernie Martin

Short and to the point. You could have just had the first 3 lines. I love the line "well it turns out they were right." Says everything. The recipient will probably wish they hadn't begged the writer to produce a poem. Poetic justice? 

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Twilla Carpenter

Precisely. If you want a writer to write about you, then you should inspire them with your actions, not demand, beg, or moan while giving them nothing at all to work with. I'm glad that this was received so well by other writers. I think we all relate to this. This is a poem only truly appreciated by other poets. Thank you for the comment.

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Marion

Relevant write to many I should imagine...say it as it is...Nice x

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