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That Was Us

That Was Us

 
Out with the dog on his daily run
I heard playing and laughter, kids having fun
Quite a rare sight in these computerised days
The memories came back, I started to turn the page…
That was us
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A generation born in the sixties
Never to be rich but never to be poor,
Old men in the pubs, they had fought to the end
So that we had a childhood, free from war
That was us
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No phones in houses
You had to knock for your mates,
“There’s school tomorrow”
“So don’t be late!”
That was us
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The days grew long, the battles a draw
The Sun had dipped and our knees were raw,
Adventures and wars, could wait you see
There would be no T.V. if we were late for tea
That was us
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Winter arrived, we catch our breath
“Come in now you’ll catch a death!”
“Get away from the fire, you’re near the flames”
“Don’t stand so close, you’ll get Chilblains”
That was us
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Wrapped up with scarves, hands and faces aglow
So excited for Christmas and real proper snow,
“Get to bed close your eyes!”- “has he been yet?”
Mum working so hard to clear catalogue debt
That Was Us
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Our secret gang hut, underneath the arches
We would hide and play all day,
But life goes by in the blink of an eye
And growing up soon came our way…
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Now the older generation
Telling yarns in the pub
Well you see,
That is us.
 

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Lorris Morris

And you never thought it would change.....enjoy your write.....thx.

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John Astley

Thank you Lorris, yes back then I thought things would always be like that
but as you know life moves on.

Cheers mate

John

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Tony Taylor

WOW!! Sir ASTLEY!!........this took me off guard and seriously ~ "Blew me away!"......I can tell you put some serious effort into this piece......and it's not just because of how well penned it is poetically....But, it's the honesty of the locations and experiences that you're sharing with the reader that brings those memories to come LANDSLIDING back into the minds eye!!.....I mean what young boy can't relate to ~

            ~ "Our secret gang hut, underneath the arches
                 We would hide and play all day long..."

Wow!!.......JOHN!!...truly a fine piece of writing here......I'm not going to slobber over all these Beautiful, wonderful, reminiscences because i'd probably cry or something stupid like that!!  ?.......MY FAVORITE JOHN write I've ever had the pleasure to read!!........ALL STARS & PINNED!!......Damn fine work dear poet brother!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo?✴❤✴???????✴❤✴???
It's the simplicity JOHN...It's in the simplicity...bravo!

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John Astley

Oh my, Tony! thanks you for your kind words and insight. Its all true. I was out with my dog and saw three boys playing and thought "that was us"
the rest came from that and of course the fond memories from the summer holidays of '74, '75 and '76 - Much more innocent times. It was fun to write as I don't write as much these days and felt justified because of feedback and understanding like yours.
Thanks Tony my friend

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pauline codd

Lovely, I can here my mum now, 'don't sit near the fire, you' ll melt the marrow in your back! "... lovely write.. Xx

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John Astley

Hi, thanks Pauline, I always appreciate your comments and I am glad it brought memories back. I was considering a non rhyme approach but wasn't confident enough, so I went with what I know

X

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pauline codd

sometimes the writing composes itself, I seem to drift mid sentence rhyming... I'm not a strict adhere to conformity, your write flows.. I've lost inspiration of late.. X

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John Astley

I've learned not to force inspiration,  it will find you, I've gone for quality and enjoyment  over productivity. X

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