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The Bar In Heaven

The Bar In Heaven

Everything was open, no plastic screens, hooray,
no track and trace, no table service anyway,
even closer together but they only let ghosts in,
everyone so excited - they didn't know where to begin,

How do you drink when you're a ghost? It's easy -
you take a sip and the liquid disappears, transparency,
sometimes they fall over but no one saw a thing,
although there may be others with the occasional wing.

You had to go out in the clouds if you wanted a smoke,ย 
unsupported, no chairs, this system was a bit of a joke,
however, we were all back to strange beings abnormal,
after what we'd all been through, it was magical.

I floated up to the bar, I thought nothing was off-limits,
I asked for a whiskey but was told: 'Sorry, we don't serve spirits.'

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Tony Taylor

LOL!!...LOL!!......What a blast that was to read......and impressive how ypou were able rhyme at the end of lines and keep the narrative going so smoothly........a truly humorous piece of poetic pleasure......PINNED!!....I laughed out loud my friend!!......Thank You!!.....I needed that TERRY!!......Peace!!.......T xoย  : )

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Terry Reeves

Hi Tony,
Glad you enjoyed -
we can't drink only outside a bar in UK
until April 12th.
Regards,
Terry.
xoxo : )

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Being Me

๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃย  ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ย  LOVE it!!ย  Brilliantlyย  entertaining ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Terry Reeves

Hi Tina,
Thanks so much,
love Terry.
Xoxo : )

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