The beauty beneath

Some people thought she was crazy,
some people thought she was weak,
only the real ones know what she’s hiding beneath,
something no one else could see,
The world is a cruel place,
no matter what you believe,
so hold on as tight as can be,
No one believed the person that she could be,
No one believed at all because they couldn’t see,
they couldn’t see the beauty she was hiding beneath,
Waiting to shine as far as the naked eye could see,
No one could give her the love that she needed,
the love that she craved,
the love that would ultimately lead her to her grave

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Never really wrote anything like this so please comment and share your thoughtsÂ
wow this is powerful and courageous stuff.
Nothing wrong with your poetic ability.keep writing like this and you will find yourself through words.
thank you!! i never really felt confident in my writing so thank you for commenting and giving me inspirational words that encourage me to do better.Â
Your welcome just keep that writing going.
This very well written, I thoroughly enjoyed. Â
thank you so much. i’ve never wrote outside the box and i wasn’t sure if it was good.Â
No problem your very talented.
It's an interesting read,
keep up the good work!Â