Poem -
The Beauty of You
The depth of a soul,
its intricate maze.
Insightful, delightful,
leaves hearts ablaze.
Those selfless acts
endeavoured to pursue.
The radiance formed,
from the light, you ensue.
All evoke the beauty of you.
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Very lovely Gwendoline...?
Thank you so much Marion ? ?
Lovely write angel
Thank you Angel ?
This is really, really lovely, Gwendoline x
Thanks ever so much BM x
You are welcome... I love your work x
I love your work too and intend to read more of it x
Hi Gwendoline,
Welcome to Cosmo. This beautiful poem, cuts right to the readers heart and Soul. I'm looking forward to sharing more time together. You will note, that almost all of my comments are in poetic form, either verse or Haiku.
The depth of your Soul
Radiates for all to see
The beauty of you
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Hello Larry,
Thank you for the warm welcome and beautiful comment. To leave such attentive words on another’s verse is such a thoughtful gesture and pleasure to receive. I am so grateful and look forward to reading your work
All the best
Gwendolyn x
Gwen beauty evoked and beauty bestowed all magically found in your beautiful and most warming poem.
And what more could anyone desire for you'd only guild the lily.
A superb write and full honours deservedly given to you for doing so.
Hang in there Gwen and keep writing for I'll keep reading and not forgetting the words thank you.
Such beautiful feedback Shaun, you are a true wielder of words even in your commentary. Such a delight to find these hidden treasure you left. So sorry cosmo never sent me a notification
Thank you my friend for always being such a huge support and creative writer here on cosmo ❤