This is such a lovely gesture.
Just like Charlotte...You and I both know what it is to live in that cave...amidst the echoed voices of our own demons; staring into the darkness as the darkness stares back into us...and laughs mockingly.
This bleak cave
Need not be your home
But you're right...there is a way out. A small, but terrifying, act of courage...or a loving gesture from a friend...can bring you into the sun again. The cave is no-one's home...but so many, too many, make a home there.
Thanks Jason, I'm glad you liked it...your right we both know how the darkness feels, I found it comforting to know that I was not the only one.
All my love
your Lorna
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YES!!..... well done dear poet sister LORNA!!...... that Title you chose says so much in and of itself...... knowing your subject matter is a big part of any artistic endeavor...... and it's obvious that you know where she's at .......a humble and generous offering here...... delivered with a succinct profoundness!!.......PINNED!!......bravo!.....smokin' grooves girlfriend!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?☀✴✳
Hi Tony, I think as poets we are all susceptible to the dark, and Its good to know you are not alone even when everything inside your head makes you feel that way.
Im really glad you liked this, Thank you so much
Lorna
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Effective motivational and inspirational work encouraging the development of a fresh outlook and philosophy regarding the perception of oneself.
This powered piece is simple in design but admirably grasps the main concept of self esteem in few words.
You write from the heart thinking of others. Great.
All the best to you. x :)
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This is such a lovely gesture.
Just like Charlotte...You and I both know what it is to live in that cave...amidst the echoed voices of our own demons; staring into the darkness as the darkness stares back into us...and laughs mockingly.
But you're right...there is a way out. A small, but terrifying, act of courage...or a loving gesture from a friend...can bring you into the sun again. The cave is no-one's home...but so many, too many, make a home there.
But there is a way out.
All my love,
your Jason xxx
Thanks Jason, I'm glad you liked it...your right we both know how the darkness feels, I found it comforting to know that I was not the only one.
All my love
your Lorna
Xxxxxx
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Hi Lorna,
a lovely write for Charlotte ## short but inspirational ###
love
Leah
Thank Leah, I'm glad you liked it xxx
YES!!..... well done dear poet sister LORNA!!...... that Title you chose says so much in and of itself...... knowing your subject matter is a big part of any artistic endeavor...... and it's obvious that you know where she's at .......a humble and generous offering here...... delivered with a succinct profoundness!!.......PINNED!!......bravo!.....smokin' grooves girlfriend!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?☀✴✳
Hi Tony, I think as poets we are all susceptible to the dark, and Its good to know you are not alone even when everything inside your head makes you feel that way.
Im really glad you liked this, Thank you so much
Lorna
xxxx
Hi Lorna A truly inspiring write
A lovely thing to do for Charlotte
So much to take, from so few words
Great write!
Best wishes Debs xx
Hi Deb's, thank you so much for your lovely comment, I really appreciate it.
hope you're well
Lorna
Xxx
I am well Thank you Lorna
Wishing you and Jason much happiness
Love n hugs Debs xxx
Thanks Debs, glad your well
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Loved this very empowering.
Hi Ashes, thank you so much for your comment, I'm glad you found it empowering
Lorna
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So gorgeous and compelling!
Hi Madeleine, Thank you so much for your comment, im glad you enjoyed it
Lorna
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Effective motivational and inspirational work encouraging the development of a fresh outlook and philosophy regarding the perception of oneself.
This powered piece is simple in design but admirably grasps the main concept of self esteem in few words.
You write from the heart thinking of others. Great.
All the best to you. x :)
thank you so much Richard, I hope your well..
I always appreciate your reviews on my poems
I'm so glad you enjoyed this one :)
Lorna
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I totally agree....What a beautiful thing to do for Charlotte....you have a big heart
Thank you Rose, I just wanted her to know that she's not alone
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