THE DOWNPOURING
We all once walked, on shadowed footsteps aflame
Now a stagnant planet is all that remains
Descendants below, overcome by grief
Bare-footed bodies, lying buried beneath.
On the dark side of the sun
Rains ruin, eternal
Yet no rivers run.
Piercing the heavens, a star-studded sky
Irradiates droplets that convective clouds cry
Plagued by perpetual precipitation
Wind-swept tears stream, down the face of creation.
Christening moonsβ craters, soaking her skin
Darkness adheres to gravitational spin
At twilightsβ time to finally shine,
Β the deluge decides to flood the skies.
Cursed are the comets, crashing off-course
Born into form from the solar storms
Torn are the forlorn creatures of fire
Dire straits setting the sunsβ funeral pyre.
Β
Extinguished in aguish
Rainclouds will relish
When the people all perish
Evil will be embellished.
Β
Submerged by the downpour
Immersed planets have purged
Emerging volcanoes, now ignore natural urge
To scorch and surge, molten lava must merge
But we were all blighted, reunited at birth.
Designed to be desolate
Death devours our earth.
Β
I inhale the deathless breath; and drown
Vivid, violent fear has consumed me now.
Bow down to the chaos adorning that crown.
If by chance,
A split-second,
Glimmer of light
Be brilliant enough to diverge from the night
Caught in reflection with direction, insight.
You just might sight my imageβ¦
A mirage winged and white.
All because right before, I saw the downpour
Sunsβ morning day dawned,
spawning moonsβ mourning call.
Heeding my fate, the date I would fall.
Reassuring my rest,
as the graveyards new guest
My death ends the darkness,
to the downpours success.
Carey Milton
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Amazing use of phrasing and the wielding of alliteration........ painting an awesome picture in the minds eye of your reader......."...A mirage, winged and white...."...... the down pouring sending death hurtling toward Earth in the form of "cursed comets" etc........ but this delivery is so poetically delivered that it seems to sing the heralding of earth changes to come...... but also gives that glimmer of hope for humanity....... you are such a gifted writer CAREY!!......ALL STARS....... compelling as hell!!...... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!........PINNED this one sweet poetess!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo
Hello! a belated welcome to cosmo! great pen!
Hey! Great writing......most accurate.....as I read, I wondered how it would go as the poem progressed in vivid, yet mysteriously hidden truths, about the world today and what is happening....then The Rapture! At least that was my take on...split second....glimmer of light....winged.... white.....and at the end.....success!.... for all who were taken by the rapture! Which by the way will be me......I'm outta here at that time!!!!! Come quickly Lord Jesus!
At least that was my take on this one! Wonderful writing....Thanks for sharing!Β Β Β Β Paula