Poem -

The Falling of Fall

The Falling of Fall

The maple trees shiver, leafs red fire

Across the river a doe takes a drink

Morning air is clean and crisp

While a hawk circles, hunger callingย ย ย ย ย ย 

Birch trees ripped, and rippling yellow

Harbor the buck slowly eating his fill

Azure skies foretell frosty meadows

As geese fly, arrowshot, southward

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Byd0nz

HI rebecca. I like the serenity of nature, I like nature inspired poems like yours. I am however, jealous

of the colours that you get to see. We dont get mass of colour like that here in NZ.

Cheers Byd0nz

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RRG (Rebecca)

Hello Byd0nz. Thank you for stopping by and reading.ย 

The color is splendid in this area, but it lasts for maybe three days at the peak. We do enjoy spots of it as the season progresses, but the burst of it is quick and very sweet. It is easy to miss if the clouds hang low and the rain is falling.ย 

I am a bit jealous too. I've always wanted to visit your neck of the woods, but haven't gotten there. Thanks again and have a great weekend.ย 

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J A Overton

Hi Rebecca,ย 

ย  ย  ย  ย  ย  ย  ย  ย  ย  ย  ย  ย This was a lovely read, beautiful images portrayed here and very well written. thanks for the follow too :)

Jeff

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RRG (Rebecca)

Hello Jeff and thank you too. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this. I love the beauty of nature. So glad I could share it with you. Happy Weekend :)

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