Poem -
The Gift
We take the embers of life and torch them into oceans of allurement and reverie
Prose forming into lava, drenching, engulfing all that is vile and abhorrent in reality
Breathing essence where there is no soul, seeing beauty where othersβ see only pain
Some say, this river is a deluge of delirium, a torment from far deep within the ardor
But, this bequest has given wings to fly where birds dare not, fins to swim into the abyss
A bestowal of uniqueness, an acquittal of rapture, and a display of a lonely fragile heart
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Hey CARON!!.~ This swept me away into its VERY "close to my heart" intent!! ....to me it came as a writer observing poetically that which passes through the minds eye & immediate environment of the author....... with a swimmingly well delivered set of phrasing...... speaking to the ability to choose the beauty in life.... rather than wallow in the negativity that is most assuredly a part of the ballet that we call life....... you are natural born poet...... and I am a fan!!......ALL STARS...... well done sweet poetess!!........T xo
Tony, thank you for the beautiful comments! I think you hit the nail on the head and are correct in your analysis!
Kind regards
Caron xΒ
Hi Β Caron Another beautiful writeΒ
from you.Your writing has a kind of elegance
i cant Β quite explain it but i love reading your work
A pleasure to readΒ Β
Best wishes DebsΒ Β
Thank you so much Deborah! I am thrilled you love it!
Kind regards
Caron x
Nice use of wonderful words
Thank you Hanna!
Kind regards
Caron x
stellar write.
Thank you, PoetessDarkly, I am very grateful!
Kind regards
Caron x